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this story is good please continue

Pretty consistent value for your time in reading. Good work on the character development and thank you for getting rid of the loudmouth!

i have been loving this story ever since you posted it on fanfiction.net, and im woundering if you stoped writing on this story since you havent posted anything for awile. i hope you are still planning to continue this story.

very goot story so far hope u update soon

I've come to realize something lately, why Naruto can do the kage and not the simple one. Think about it, his chakra, thanks to the fox, is too damn strong no matter what he tries. So the simple one will always end up overloaded. However unlike the other one the kage isn't a simple illusion. The Kage does one thing the other doesn't. Because the kage isn't an illusion it actually splits the uses chakra amongst the clones and users, say he uses one clone it's split in half, three in thirds and so on. So by using multiple clones Naruto can more easily even out his chakra and not only control it but weaken the overpower. Huh, never considered it that way before.

great story so far hope that you continue it

Keep up the great work! Oh, and please update soon! I was so happy to see that Sasuke wasn't gonna be a power hungry bastard in this fic!

This is a very good story. Another reviewer complained that you made Naruto and Sasuke be Danzo's perfect example of Ninja, which is true, except that you have shown that while they have this stone-cold work persona, they are still human outside of when on missions, so ignore the earlier review stating such. I think that this makes this story one of the better ones out there. You have taken the Naruto universe and actually made them be ninja and not flashy warriors and I have to say that you have done it very well. Keep up the excellent work and I can not wait for more.

~GoD

Love the story hope you continue with it

Your story went from pretty cool to totally appalling. You essentially made Naruto and Sasuke in Danzo's ideal of a ninja. So I'm stopping at chapter 9 and not coming back.