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by asuka5271

person ohitsjordan
schedule October 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That.. That caught me off guard... Poor Sasuke.
It was fantastic! It made me cry a bit, but it was amazing none the less!
person EnRagedLamb
schedule August 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OH SHIZZLE MY NIZZLE HIZZLE, I honestly did NOT see that ending coming. I mean, I probably should have if I knew that this story was going to have a surprise twist ending... but no, I just thought it was another tastless fanfic plot that was overly used yet still enjoyable to read. I was WRONG. I don't normally give reviews like this, like everyone else who are lazy or don't really care to, but I had to write this so that I can tell you how wrong I was and how sorry I am. lol I don't know why. Do you know how hard it is to find decent fanfics? ('Course you do. lol) This story was pretty good, and I was like, "Meh, I'll read since I like supernatural stuff and SasuNaru." Then I finished and I was like, "Oh shit!!! NARUTO WAS THE GHOST!? S/he pulled a "The Others" twist!!!" (Have you seen that movie?! Intense and creepy as fuck!) The way you started your story, it didn't seem at all like Naruto was the ghost, just like the movie, so that's why I definitely gotta applaud you for that. Near the end though (I'm assuming you completed this story), I feel it was a bit rushed even at the scene where Naruto found out. Obviously it needs work like every other story out there but I'm not complaining since I read it out of entertainment and not to critique (Gotta put down your grammar Nazi liscense sometimes, ya know? I ain't professional anyway so who cares?). Again, great job. Good luck on your next project!!!
schedule February 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have to be honest, I was suspicious about the plot from the very beginning, but I was still shocked! I don't want to say anything in case I ruin the ending for somebody just starting it, but I the last two chapters really made me sad. I got a little misty eyed and I feel so sorry for them both. I will definitely be reading Sasuke's story, just to get his viewpoint on all of this. Well done!
person meowkuu2
schedule February 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*stares*... I hope u kick Minato's ass in the sequel...*sniff*.. I think I'm going to go cry now.....
person smint45
schedule February 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
No thats not fair!!! Why can't they be together!!! I really don't like storys without happy ending *lying on the flor crieing her eyes out* That was even worse than Sirius and Dumbeldores death put together!!! But I loved the rest of the story!!! Only the ending was way too sad!!!
person smint45
schedule February 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was so great!!! So sorry I missed the last 3 chappies!!! But Naruto beeing the gost!!!! I really didn't expect that!!!! I really hope that they will be able to have a realtionship still!!! I don't want them to seperate!!! Naruto really deserves happienass after the crappy life he had!!! I really hope that you will update soon!!! See you!!!
schedule February 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
aww poor Naru! I totally didn't see that coming when Naruto turned out to be the ghost and not Sasuke
schedule February 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Why in the name of all things holy would you stop there?!?!?!?!?!?! That is very evil my dear and big, black kitty is hissing at you. I need more!
person smint45
schedule January 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is great!!!! I totally love the gost Sasuke!!!! And now Naruto confessed to him and dosen't even know that!!! I wonder how they will get together!!! I want to know more about Sasuke!!! Please update soon!!!
schedule December 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Naruto throwing up on Sasuke? seriously gross! haha! But I really liked this update and the part with naruto writing about shika and ino was funny..