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person qwerty
schedule September 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I should have realized that the village wouldn't be fooled.
Great chapter!
person smint45
schedule September 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was so great!!!! I really like this story!!!! I can't wait for more!!!!
schedule September 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE YOU, I REALLY REALLY DO!! Damn that was HOT and the fact that they took turns. *fans self* I'm so glad that Kashi and Tachi had no problems getting in. Tsunade let Tachi stay for her own reasons, seeing as she wants Kashi to marry. It's like your mother saying 'when are you getting married and giving me grandchildren, huh!?' That's what I thought when she said that to herself.*smiles*
person smint45
schedule September 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was really great!!! I totally love this story this far!!!!! I really hope ther will be a threesome with Itachi Sasuke and kakashi!!!! I can't wait for the next time!!! See you again!!!!
schedule September 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was HOT and then I wanted to cry!! DAMN YOU!! *smiles* But I STILL loved it!!
schedule September 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh Sasuke came so CLOSE to being on the top of my KILL list!! Even though he didn't kill my Tachi(kashi don't look at me like that, we can share)he still hurt him...that jerk!! *pouts* Well at least they know the truth and now Sasuke can stop being an ASS, and be the little bro Itachi needs him to be. And Kakashi and Itachi can get their FREAK ON!! Well, AFTER they take care of what needs to be done. *smiles sheepishly*
person qwerty
schedule September 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So Sasuke knows! I wonder if Kakashi's plan will really work... won't that be such a huge strain on Itachi's chakra to be henged into a girl all the time? Hmm...
Keep going!
schedule September 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Don't give up Kashi, you can get Tachi to stay 'cause I really think he wants it. He just needs that small push for him to admit it. *smiles* And if Sasuke tries anything to hurt Tachi KILL THE BASTARD!!
person smint45
schedule September 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Really great start!!!! I can't wait for more!!!!!
person qwerty
schedule September 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story. I can't wait for the next chapter!!
keep going!