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September 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I find the plot line of this fiction to be very interesting. It's something new ( well at least I haven't found one like this before) and I would really love to see how you will continue on. The only complaint I have is the choppiness at some parts. It makes the entire scene seem rushed, or in some cases just lacking in something. But all in all I'll be waiting for the next chapter. Happy writing ^.^