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December 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
good story cant wait for the next chapter
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January 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
more
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February 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
please continue this story.
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January 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hello, i just wanted to say that i like your story.
ive been watching the eps of the show online so i have just one question.
that demon fox girl, is she actually from the show or was she an OC, i didnt see any thing explaining if she was or wasnt.
also,will you be working on a 2nd chapter and continue this story or are you leaving it?
ive been watching the eps of the show online so i have just one question.
that demon fox girl, is she actually from the show or was she an OC, i didnt see any thing explaining if she was or wasnt.
also,will you be working on a 2nd chapter and continue this story or are you leaving it?
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January 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi, hope that soon you can update your ficc and that the next girl be hinata and later kurenai, bye
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November 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
great ficc, I already want to see the next chap, By the way will Kya chance the older girls of naruto harem so they can share his life span and when gonna be hinata turn? and what about anko and hanabi? and by the way is there a opcion in this page so I can know when you update this ficc? bye until the next time
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November 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Brilliantly concieved, expertly written, and incredibly hot--this adult fanfic has everything necessary to be a monster hit! Hope you update soon!
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October 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
good story cant wait to see the next part so please don't let it drift away
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October 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, great story, please continue.
The only thing that really stuck out was that you said Shizune's ovaries don't "produce" any eggs. The human female is born with all the eggs she will ever be able to use ever. Now there is the act of ovulation where due to hormonal changes the ovary will expel an egg. If that's what you meant you may need to clarify. Don't know why but that kinda stuck out to me.
The only thing that really stuck out was that you said Shizune's ovaries don't "produce" any eggs. The human female is born with all the eggs she will ever be able to use ever. Now there is the act of ovulation where due to hormonal changes the ovary will expel an egg. If that's what you meant you may need to clarify. Don't know why but that kinda stuck out to me.
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October 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Excellent first chapter! You obviously spent alot of time thinking about what your writing instead of just banging somthing out and it shows. Your attention to details make this very believable and fun to read. Hope to see more of this story as I'm excited to see where you take it.
Good luck and good writing
Good luck and good writing