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by shinigamislayer

person Rainwater
schedule April 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Fucking deliciously hot, holy hell!
person serenity
schedule March 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Dude, the stories you write should come with the warning "slip and slide". first you slip into the story and get really horny, and then before you know it, you're fingers are sliding down to finger/jerk yourself. well, for me anyway, thanks for getting me hot and horny. ;-)
schedule September 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this one-shot so much! GOD.
person Satski
schedule December 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Uwah next chapter!! next chapter!! onegai-shimasu!
schedule December 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love how dominant you made Naruto in this fic.
schedule October 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
very hot, you did a very very good job!
and definately it should get a sequel, it can't end like this!!
:D
schedule October 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*squees* Oh my god that was so fricking hot. I could so picture the two texting each other like that and oh if it wasn't for Sakura they could have hooked up sooner. I hope there is another chapter to this... maybe even a three-shot. Yeah, I know I'm hopeful but like the second be the bathroom scene and the third be aftermath or what not. This should so continue ><

*gives you puppy dog eyes* please.We all would like to see Sasuke back up his words XP
schedule October 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh! I wanted more, after reading them I wanted more to happen and it so made it sound like there was going to be another chapter. T.T
schedule October 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
EROTIC!! HOT!! STEAMY!! OH MY GOSH that was INTENSE!!! I can't wait to read the next chapter!! We have to find out what happens next!! :) Wicked Grin!! :) LOVE IT!!!
schedule October 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
HOT! Can there be more?