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for 'Til Next Time

by Perpetual159

person EliHumn
schedule July 21, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Damn, it looks like they never got to finish it and it stopped right as it was about to get even more heated. Oh well, hopefully one day they'll come back and complete the story. It was a good read 

person tk04
schedule August 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Omg i love it. Love how u switch their gender but still keep their personality the same as the anime. Please don't stop. Keep going. It would be nice it was a whole story than oneshot.

Anyways i glade that i encounter this. Keep up the great work.
person Nimbafuu
schedule September 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love it! You capture the characters in such an amazing way! I'll definitely be eager to read more of your writing!
person IloveYouForThis
schedule November 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
that.was.EPIC. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I'm dying to what happens next. you cock blocker D:
person omegamd
schedule October 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Did you just...cock block us by stopping there? How dare you! XD Great story, I really hope to see more, and I love Clones, great story!
person magic713
schedule October 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aww man. It's bad enough I have to wait for you to update Clones, but now I have to wait for this juicy story as well. In all seriousness, great job.
person Sandmaster
schedule October 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
heh! loved this work, I actually enjoy Gender swaps in the naruto universe, which is odd, cause most of the time I hate them. but something about naruto's persona seems so...sexless, i suppose is the word that it works just as well in a female setting as it does in a male one.

that being said, I think you made a major mistake. Now I love two of your stories, and will wait with baited breath for a continuation of this imagining, as well as clones! curse you!

and onto less fun stuff, your characterization is very strong,perhaps because of your earlier work, I feel the characters are stronger here then in your first chapter of clones. Grammar and Sentence structure are great and your style is oddly engaging.

In short, keep it up!

Sandmaster
person Nimis
schedule October 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
give us a link to this illustration please... and great story would be great to see more