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December 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is sooo good!!! Is the real Naruto dead and gone and the angel a part of his personality? Or is it just a fluke that he is like Naruto and the real Naruto will eventually come back and this Naruto will fall for Itachi? Arggg!!! Write more please!!!!
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March 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is really good! I gotta love how there's SO many possible outcomes! I'm looking forward to the next chapters; checking every day actually..^^ I can't wait.^^
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January 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay, a new chapter! Sasuke is STILL being a fool, despite what he thinks. He feels bad for whatever he did to human Naruto? Well, he can't make up for it by being nice to robot Naruto since as he knows, they are different people. Human Naruto is the *only* person to whom he can atone for whatever his crimes were. And when he talks about doing things better "this time," it shows that he hasn't completely separated robot Naruto from human Naruto since there is no "this time" with robot Naruto, this is the first and only time. Robot Naruto should play matchmaker and bring human Naruto back into Sasuke's life so they can settle their heartbreak.
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January 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very good concept and your writing flows together, I actually enjoyed it and that is saying a lot because normally I do not read SasuNaru. However you might want to consider enlisting the aide of a beta, a story that has poor grammar and punctuation only takes away from how good it is.
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January 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What a great story! How did Orochimaru come to make this Naruto double? Is the real Naruto still alive? If so, what does he think of this?
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December 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
sooo... really good story. What happened to the real Naruto?
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November 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
o.O ... this is a true masterpiece so far, and keep up the good work
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November 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Human Naruto sounds like such a great character! I love a really smart Naruto. He sounds like the perfect match for the Sasuke in this story. What happened to him? I really, really hope the romance in this story ends up being between Human Naruto & Sasuke just because the two of them have all that history together, not to mention, it always seems more than a little unfair to both people when someone falls in love with a person who resembles his/her dead (or otherwise absent) loved one. Even if Sasuke says the robot is nothing like Naruto, he still went ahead and gave him his name, which says a lot about how he still feels about human Naruto and how difficult it would be to separate human from robot Naruto for him. -_- But besides that, bringing human Naruto into the story would mean you'd have two Narutos running around, which would be seriously, seriously cute! (Would they argue with one another or get along together like peas in a pod?) Well, that's just my two cents. BTW, I thought it was rather cute that Hinata was married to Shino for once instead of Kiba. Finally, Shino gets the girl. :)
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November 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Since you're just testing this story out does that mean you're not continuing? It's really good.
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October 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
erm wow :s i would have preferred more sasuke and naruto interaction rather than that long and descriptive scene with kimi et al I'm used to reading stories focused on sas and naru though maybe this one isnt? i dunno, i just didnt like that it took up so much of the chapter
neways that aside i look forward to the rest its interesting and wanna see how this 'angel' naru/ real naru thing works out
neways that aside i look forward to the rest its interesting and wanna see how this 'angel' naru/ real naru thing works out