rate_review Reviews

I've really enjoyed reading this story. The thing that draws me in is that there is apparently a human Naruto, or was one, and then there is the android Naruto. I'm wondering will they ever meet. Which one represents the Naruto we all know and love? Based on the fact that the other android swore that she was Tsunade, are the two Naruto one and the same, and Orochimaru is actually more twisted than we gave him credit for? I'm assuming all of these questions will be answered as the story goes on. I am concerned about the rape scene in this chapter. Based on Orochimaru's work we all understood that he was a creep, so I'm not sure if the detail was necessary. Implying it, and then showing more interaction between Naruto and Sasuke would have flowed better with the other chapters, imho. But please keep on posting, because you have a great story.

Very, very intriguing story! I love the concepts in there as well as the process and time taken to introduce the scene of the story and the characters. Very well done, you have a capturing writing style as well. I'm a large NaruSasu so I sort of hope that's how this will go...but Sasuke is giving off Seme signs...so SasUKE might be off the cards hmm?
Regardless, this story has brilliant potential, I hope you continue, I send you inspiration vibes!!!!

i love this tale ill be waiting for the next chapters

thanks for updating!

huurai, Naruto already appears...hmm..so what happen to the real Naruto?

please update soon

wow! interesting story

please update soon, i hope that this is a Sasuke and Naruto Story

I read the first 3 chapters so far and I'm impressed. The story is very interesting and has got a lot of potential. I'm so curious what Naruto's part in the story will be. Is he also a robot like Sakura or does he work for Orochimaru? Please continue!

This is an interesting story so far. I like the fact that Sasuke met Sakura first before meeting Naruto, it's unexpected that the love interest isn't the first one to show up, and also shows what kind of guy Sasuke really is since he chooses to help Sakura not because he's attracted to her or wants anything from her, but because he has a few basic principles (just like pre-timeskip Sasuke used to have). From that standpoint, I'd disagree with the other reviewer that Sasuke is too nice. He's about as friendly to Sakura here as he used to be in the manga (which is to say, not very), so that's actually pretty in-character. There's no reason he absolutely HAS to be an amoral bastard/mini-Orochimaru, is there? I'm curious to see what you're going to do with Naruto: is he going to be a robot like Sakura, or maybe someone who works with the robots, like an engineer? Looking forward to the next chapter. :)

Interesting! I like the concept a lot! You should continue this!

i really like this, the fic has a good topic that can become even more interesting. congrats¡

Interesting...I can say that I am very interested in reading more. Very unusual and it has defineately caught my eye. Look forward to more.