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Chap. 7
I laughed my dang head off and on and on till my sides hurt!! The thing about the blinds and chair just killed me from laughing so hard. I can so picture the situation.

Loved the Truth or Dare game and their first kiss. That was just so SWEET!!

Chap. 5
Have to dash to work but had to say how much I enjoyed this chapter!! I can just picture Sasuke's shock of Naruto's apartment and how sick Naruto looks to be....excited to see where this goes!! :) Wicked Grin

I friggen loved! The story! Buill be honest I hated the ending. Partly because It was the END and partly becouse it was kind of confusing. It should be re written honestly. But on the most part it was absolutely amazing and I thoroughly enjoyed the experience of reading it. And I hope to read some of your other stories.

But this one most definitely deserves a sequel you can just end it where you did! I wanna know what happens next! I want an epic happy ending! To match an epic story!

Yah anyways I really do love the story and for that you get 1 cookeez you get the second one when I see a sequel! Loovea yah!

Now write godamnit! Lol <3

Hey this was a good story! There are some spelling errors I think you should be aware of, but other then that, you did a pretty good job. I would not be opposed to a sequel, but I think this story won't be hurt if you decide not to do one.

ohh...so lovely glad sasuke finally told his brother to shove it and is taking his life be they reins.so glad they both didnt have to give up their lives to be happy,does this mean sasuke went back to his job at icha icha?too bad his parents dont support him well sasuke lost 2 people and gained a whole lot more(including a whole lot of orphans).well at least he has someone forever since he did already break hearts(like that sixteen year old boy).so loved this story and wouldnt mind a sequal but not pushing for one with bribes of cookies and time machines.its all up to you.forever support!!

~hisoka

Just read from Chapter 1 - Chapter 20 What a great story. I cant wait to see what happens next. Please keep going.

Chap. 4
Sai....I'm just here for emotional support......LOL....rolls on the floor laughing myself to death...seriously!!!

Chap. 1
This is looking to be very interesting and an exciting beginning for Naruto and Sasuke. Wicked grin I can wait to see what happens next.

Just drink the orange juice bastard....LOL....LOL...heheheh Naruto is such a glutton for punishment....does he like have a death wish or something?? LOL

Such a cool story. I read the first 16 chapters in one go and just finished the rest today. Simply wonderful and i can hardly wait for more.