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by writeaddict

person qwerty
schedule November 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. Even more curious about Naruto's past now...
Great chpater! Keep going!
schedule November 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this chapter was a little choppy but very well done i would like to see a little more on Narutos past but also on how Haku took it when Naruto left Canada still well done and thanks for sharing
schedule November 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thank you! :)

And I just want you to know I am not above bribery to get more of this out of you. I love the dark edges you've given Naruto. Though it does make me wonder just how two sided the abuse in that relationship was... or if Naruto is trying to atone for something and his way of doing so was going back to Sasuke time after time. You've got me thinking now.
schedule November 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hmmm...i wonder what sasuke would do if he found out just who he was "fucking" with. now here's the real question. why hasn't kyuubi wiped sasuke off the map for what he's done to naruto?
person Anon
schedule November 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, as usual. Can't wait to see how Kyuubi and Naruto's relationship plays out in the grand scheme of things.
person Anon
schedule November 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh. So we get to learn a thing or two about Naruto's past and his relationship with Kyuubi. It leaves me itching to know more.
schedule November 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this story. I've read each chapter and keep my eyes open for new. :) I can't wait for the next one.
schedule November 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am praying that Naruto returns to Shikamaru.
person Jessie
schedule November 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm a culinary student and I was delighted to read that Naruto is a chef. :) I also love the paragraphs in which you talk about his cooking. This story is a great pleasure to read and I hope you continue. It's sad that I will have to wait another week for the next installment. Great work!
schedule November 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
-sigh- and we all know what sasuke said was true then. shika does love naruto. he would make great boyfriend material. can't wait to see the two of them hook up. loving the story btw. srry could not review past chappies but my conmputer was having problems.