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for The Things That Don't Match

by writeaddict

schedule March 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i like this story i do but the new chapter feels rushed and too short
person Dorkchic
schedule March 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am voting for Kimi to be with Neji or Gaara. Gaara and he are of a like temperment and he would not freak out about Kimi's job. Plus I can just imagine the delicious sounds that Kimi could wring from him and the kinkiness those two could get up to. As for Neji... two glorious lush manes of long hair clinging to sweaty, lithe, and panting bodies... I am gonna stop now because my imagination could lead me to trouble. Cannot wait for the next chapter!
schedule March 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
All right Shikamaru! Way to enforce your boundaries!

Naruto is about to get pushed out of his comfort zone again...
schedule March 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ahh Shikamaru that was a little underhanded... I love it! :)

And that is exactly what I meant. Maybe the best way for Naruto to figure out just what Shika means to him is to have someone else take that attention away frm him. :) (the link is working I just copy and paste it into my address bar.)
person Anon
schedule March 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Loved the last two chapters! Can't wait to see how the relationships unfold from here on out! Kepp up the good work!
schedule February 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
SERIOUSLY! I don't know who to smack harder right now. Naruto or Shikamaru. BOYS!!! hrmmm... now I want Shikamaru to start dating someone just to see how Naruto would like it. Or... appear to be seeing someone. Maybe just hanging out with a new friend... I don't know. Just something to knock some sense into Blondie Bear!
schedule February 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Good good good! I'm glad the new BF isn't there hanging out with all the friends. That would be really hard on Shika.
schedule February 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The link to your responses in the forum isn't working.

Great chapter, though.
schedule February 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay for Shika/Naru! I thought I was gonna have to bail on this fic for a moment. :whew: :D I took a chance on trying something new with this fic and I'm liking where it looks like you're taking us. I can't wait for more.
schedule February 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*holds up a glittery Shika/Naru banner* YAY! Poor Shikamaru though... ugh he's really hurting and Naruto is just... Naruto.