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for The Things That Don't Match

by writeaddict

person shadowkat
schedule February 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Keep it shikamaru and naruto. There are not many good ones of them.
person Yuki
schedule February 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Shika/Naru!! PLEASE!!! PLEASE!!!!!!
person mari
schedule February 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
just voting for shika/naru and wanted to say I think it's a great story
schedule February 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
No Kimi/Naru!!! Shika/Naru for the win! Please. I'm reading I'm looking forward to more.
person Ajablue
schedule February 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am voting for Shikamaru. Though I enjoy your Kimi and he needs more love. Maybe he gets his own story and love as a sequel?
person Ari
schedule February 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I would love to see this turn out to be a Shika/Naru. Its a pairing that is not done to often, but I do enjoy
schedule February 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Shika/Naru! Cos its so damn sweet! and I think I'd be really disappointed if it were to change from that now!
schedule February 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
If Shikamaru didn't end up with Naruto this story wouldn't make sense. The whole plot is centered around Shika's unrequited love for Naruto, and if the story ends with Kim/Nar it would suck balls. I thought having Naruto sex up everyone while he was away was off and drifting away from the original plot line, but chalked it up to plot/character development and kept reading, so if you change the final pairing this story is moot.
Keep in mind that this is your story, you control where it goes, not the readers. We're just here for the ride, so if you plan to let one of your readers influence your writing or your original story plan then there is no point in writing at all because you would grow to hate what you have created or at the very least lose interest. Your writing thus far has been very insightful, I would hate to see you destroy such a well thought out story by changing the plot to suit one person. The story is more important than being popular or a people-pleaser, write something you'll be proud of or don't write at all.
person Sunnyfox
schedule February 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Plz, let Shikamaru be the one for Naruto!
Shikanaru! :3
schedule February 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Why does Naruto need to choose? Shikamaru can have it Tuesdays, Thursdays and Saturdays; Kimimaro can swing with it Mondays, Wednesdays and Fridays. Sundays can be designated group Sausage-fest Day. Seriously, what is the problem here?