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December 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story and I agree 100% with Shikamaru's reaction in the latest chapter. Naruto really needs to get a grip.
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December 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
well, i was kinda hoping shika would be more understanding but can see where he's coming from. i still like kiminaru though. bless you for writing it. LOL!
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December 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for not reveiwing the previous chapter! so you get two loving reveiws at once...
Chapter 14: Poor Kimmimaru! i felt so bad for the guy when we confronted Naruto about his test, although from Maruto's standpoint i could understand the need for it. I'm glad that they 'started over' and are moving back to Naruto's home, although i will miss the interaction with Kyuubi (and i hope he continues to call Haku).
Chapter 15: Yay Shikamaru! hehehe. i feel so bad cheering for Shika and ditching Kimmimaru the minute he's around, but i can't help it. i like the comfort and calm that you have the two of them exuding when they're together. I also enjoyed Naruto's reaction to Sakura, well played good sir, well played. God i can't spell. anyways, long story short, i love this story and hope you keep it up (but take a break to enjoy the holidays of course).
seriously you're charcterization of naruto's relationshops and how they affect everyone around him rocks.
Chapter 14: Poor Kimmimaru! i felt so bad for the guy when we confronted Naruto about his test, although from Maruto's standpoint i could understand the need for it. I'm glad that they 'started over' and are moving back to Naruto's home, although i will miss the interaction with Kyuubi (and i hope he continues to call Haku).
Chapter 15: Yay Shikamaru! hehehe. i feel so bad cheering for Shika and ditching Kimmimaru the minute he's around, but i can't help it. i like the comfort and calm that you have the two of them exuding when they're together. I also enjoyed Naruto's reaction to Sakura, well played good sir, well played. God i can't spell. anyways, long story short, i love this story and hope you keep it up (but take a break to enjoy the holidays of course).
seriously you're charcterization of naruto's relationshops and how they affect everyone around him rocks.
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December 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love that you have bought kimi inot this oh he is soo gonna put sasuke in his place, question though it itachi gonna make an appearence in this?
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December 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was great. Sakura was put in her place... awesome. Naru didn't fall for Sasuke's BS... even better. Shika and Naru are reconnecting, but I expect more when they are alone together. I'm surprised that Naru did not introduce Kimi to everyone when they first arrived. With all that was going on, it seemed a lot to put into one meeting. Maybe, bringing Kimi to meet everyone should have come a little later.
As for the infamous ex meeting the current BF, well the treat of never finding his body definitely made me laugh. Totally loved it.
As for the infamous ex meeting the current BF, well the treat of never finding his body definitely made me laugh. Totally loved it.
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December 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good job! I'm glad that Naruto is standing strong - hopefully that will continue and he won't falter! The exchange between Sasuke and Kimi was perfect. I kinda want to Sasuke to not give up because then Kimi will put him in his place! XD
Great chapter!
Great chapter!
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December 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
you cleaned the last 3 chapters up very well also i really love were the plot is going so far keep it up and ill be keeping an eye out for updates as much as i may since i have no sure way to check in right now
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December 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Waah! I totally thought they would have a fuck-buddy kind of relationship and then you would somehow get Naruto and Sasuke back together (aka the typical this kind of story plays out). I'm really glad that you changed it up! I love Kimimaro and was so sad when he died :(
Great chapter. Can't wait to see Saskue's reaction to this :P
Great chapter. Can't wait to see Saskue's reaction to this :P
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December 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yeah, a kimminaru pairing! i looooove this pairing, and it's so hard to find. course you may not keep it, but hey, it's fun to watch while it lasts, especially when naruto's friends get a gander at him. ;-)
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December 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like that Kimi is a no nonsense kind of guy and gets right to the point. Its good that he is willing to make changes to continue the relationship. I am kind of feeling a little sorry for Shika, but we'll see what happens. What I'm really looking forward to is what will happen when Kimi and Sasuke meet. That should be entertaining. Hehehe.