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for The Things That Don't Match

by writeaddict

schedule December 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nope I won't steal your thunder not yet... ;) Just never thought about all that pretty... LOL Well ok somewhere down the road I might steal it a little bit but I promise to blame... I mean credit you for the pairing! Next chapter please.
person Anon
schedule December 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
All I can say it thank you so much. Naruto and Kimi getting together is so rare, and I'm always happy to see that combination. I like that they can be kickass together and for it to leave them hot and bothered.

I will be looking forward to the next update with great anticipation.
person Anon
schedule December 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is going to be slightly long-winded (well for me), but the jist of it is you are awesome. I am continually surprised, but never ler down or fustrated by what and subsequently who you have Naruto doing. And you do it so well too! i like how you are pairing him with, well not-Sasuke, and even then you are sticking to partners you rarely get to see him with in fairly seemless fashion. Thanks, and i canèt wait to see the next chapter.
schedule December 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What the hell? Where did Kimimaro come from?

Kimimaro x Naruto is hot. But I wouldn't want to be the assassin when Kyuubi finds out.
schedule December 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hrmmm... he was such and evil single minded bastard I never took in how hot Kimimaro was, or how hot they would look together... that's for that revolation. ;0) Might steal that from you for a bit. Thank you for the awesome update excited about the next!
person Anon
schedule December 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
There is! Ah, two there is. Anyways, awesome chapter and thanks for filling in the details with Kyuubi. I rather like the older brother/dad role he plays.
person Anon
schedule December 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The itch has been scratched. Thank you very much.

With Kyuubi saying that his way of life was in Naruto's blood, does that mean Naruto's folks were in Kyuubi's business? Or, I were his parents in politics?

In either case, Naruto is shaping up to be totally kickass. He seems to be a jack of all trades... political, businessman, fighter, chef.

Can't wait for more.
schedule December 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
grammer is a little off in spots and some times it feels like somethings could have been explained a little better also spelling there are a few miss spelled words in each page
schedule December 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*pout* Its too close to christmas to have me waiting... i'm no good at waiting. LOL okok, I'll wait... please write more...
person animelover
schedule December 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i like this story ... it's different than the usual sasuke broke up with me and my life sucks fic. ;-)