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Wait, I thought Itachi broke Naruto's cheekbone. And that he landed a few other hits as well. Were they just having a slap-fight? Because you don't kiss someone when your face is broken. And then they had sex? Huh? I mean, whatever revs your engine, but at least put up a guro/gore tag. Itachi is no weakling, and if he landed as many blows as you indicated, Naruto would have massive bruising at the least and likely broken ribs/cracked bones. Have you ever broken your face/ribs/limbs? It's not conducive to sweet vanilla sex.

So sweeeeeeeeet! I loved this story! Ihope to read more from both of you soon!

Wonderful wonderful! I loved it. Very emotional and well written. I love it a great deal.

I wish this would happen in cannon too! Great, great story!

This was absoloutly fantastic!!!!! I totally loved it!!!! Nau and itachi are soooo sweet together!!!!! Thank you sooo much for posting this!!!!