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October 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was the first word that came to mind when I read this. I like how you use the seven sin. My fav was InoChoji. Most becuase I love that pairing plus this was the first time I saw a fic using Babun Baika No Jutsu for sex. read of the idea of it but never really read it.
Is this really it? It sound like there could be more.
Is this really it? It sound like there could be more.
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October 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
( I am the author of the story) Yeah, this is a one-shot. I'd build the next one separately. Also, I agree with what you didn't say, in that Chouji doesn't get nearly enough lovin' :)
I am new to the formatting of this website, so the occaisonal thought got omitted because of my use of brackets for mental words ( < I didn't know>)
I have since fixed them. The only significant impact it had was with Shikamaru / Temari, and the Sakura / Sasuke Omake.
When you said you wanted more, did you read the short Omake (s) at the end? there are 5. (And Chouji slips into one of them!)
I am new to the formatting of this website, so the occaisonal thought got omitted because of my use of brackets for mental words ( < I didn't know>)
I have since fixed them. The only significant impact it had was with Shikamaru / Temari, and the Sakura / Sasuke Omake.
When you said you wanted more, did you read the short Omake (s) at the end? there are 5. (And Chouji slips into one of them!)