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for One Night At Break

by Darkprism

person Tarn Vedra 5
schedule February 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ah, yes... the famous night at Break, where Sasuke was super star. Hm... Neji really has sadistic streak and I am glad that even if he has his prejudgements he is aware of others feelings, in this case for Naruto. Hm... but I would be so curious to see how would Hinata react hehehehe to see her older brother in such hehehe bondage style... especially in skirt :D
person Carousel
schedule December 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really want to know who Tenzou's lover was. And I would like to see him find a new one. Reading about him makes me sad.
person v
schedule November 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Excellent..although now I'm super curious about T and who his character is. I know he's one of the owners but hopefully we'll get to see his story soon also. I'm really happy that Shika and Neji suit each other so much, I love how Neji is so attentive to his needs as his submissive and willing to adjust his actions accordingly. :)
person cynaga
schedule November 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG - exquisite! An unexpected treat. I loved this line: "May the gods bless Lee's enthusiasm for oxygen."

thank you thank you thank you
person lo
schedule November 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You have really created something wonderful. I love the relationships and this world you created. Great work.
person Nivell
schedule November 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I would love to read Tenzou's story...he seems to be the most mysterious and heart-breaking character in your universe.
schedule November 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*Clapping furiously* AMEN!