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January 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I read this years ago, I never knew the story finished! Awesome! Very hot, and very good understanding! 50 Shades of Grey has nothing on you!!!!
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October 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Omg. This needs to be updated ASAP! I'm dying over here!!
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October 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This was very different but I enjoyed it very much
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July 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Personally, I think I would like the idea more if their was more of a mental and physical struggle on Sasuke's part. For one, Dominating has likely become a habit to him, and habits are rather hard to break clean from.
For instance, maybe Naruto needs to coax/convince him more to the idea of becoming a submissive (While it was all nice and good that Naruto comes off at this intense Dom, I think Sasuke would be more stubborn when giving in. In a way, this is testing his pride, and we ALL know he can be a unmovable as a mountain when it comes to his pride). Especially if he is used to being the one who is pleased during sex and not the one doing pleasing.
To get to the point: The struggling of going form Dominate to Submissive, and all the conflict that would bring, would have been more interesting to read then Sasuke giving in easily, kinky BDSM sex and then The End. Sometimes the journey to a goal is more interesting then actually reaching it.
For instance, maybe Naruto needs to coax/convince him more to the idea of becoming a submissive (While it was all nice and good that Naruto comes off at this intense Dom, I think Sasuke would be more stubborn when giving in. In a way, this is testing his pride, and we ALL know he can be a unmovable as a mountain when it comes to his pride). Especially if he is used to being the one who is pleased during sex and not the one doing pleasing.
To get to the point: The struggling of going form Dominate to Submissive, and all the conflict that would bring, would have been more interesting to read then Sasuke giving in easily, kinky BDSM sex and then The End. Sometimes the journey to a goal is more interesting then actually reaching it.
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September 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love all the narusasu fics you make, they are amazing, please keep writing more, this one is my favorite i wish that it never ends (sorry for my bad english, im not good writing it)
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May 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh gosh! This fic is awesome! I wonder if you let me translate. I really love Narusasu and with BDSM! That moment when Sasuke admit that he wanted to be filled by Naruto. I could die! I really love everything. The inner fight of Sasuke, and when he talked with Hinata and she said that she is the Dom in their relationship. Ufffff well I really love it, and I would like to share this awesome fic in Spanish's fandom. If you authorize me you could let me know by twitter. My account is @ClarautopiaWFF anyway I'm following you
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July 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Gogdangit its not effing fair!!! >:( Those skanks who hate on the story should go read something else!! And racist?! WTFFF!!! Where?! WOW people need to stop drinking the hatorade!
Anyway...I'm really glad you updated this story, I had this on my bookmarks hoping for an update because honestly this is in my top 2 favorite stories I ever found on AFF. Seriously, no joke! I'm so sad you're leaving because AFF is (despite normal FF) the only other place I get to read really good rated M stories. You're one more awesome author that's leaving... seems like we're losing a lot every day :( Y-gal is so complicated and hard to navigate but I'll dust off my old profile and try! You're just that awesome!
Well before I press submit jsut wanted you to know jsut how much I loved the plot and especially the conflict Sasuke was experiencing over his dominant and now submissive side. It made this story really interesting to follow and I just really loved it rofl >-> So I guess this is seeyalater D:
*several minutes after finding you on y-gal* Oooooookay I am completely lost. So many buttons and boxes Id where anything is lawlz! Ksrslybai
Anyway...I'm really glad you updated this story, I had this on my bookmarks hoping for an update because honestly this is in my top 2 favorite stories I ever found on AFF. Seriously, no joke! I'm so sad you're leaving because AFF is (despite normal FF) the only other place I get to read really good rated M stories. You're one more awesome author that's leaving... seems like we're losing a lot every day :( Y-gal is so complicated and hard to navigate but I'll dust off my old profile and try! You're just that awesome!
Well before I press submit jsut wanted you to know jsut how much I loved the plot and especially the conflict Sasuke was experiencing over his dominant and now submissive side. It made this story really interesting to follow and I just really loved it rofl >-> So I guess this is seeyalater D:
*several minutes after finding you on y-gal* Oooooookay I am completely lost. So many buttons and boxes Id where anything is lawlz! Ksrslybai
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July 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was freaking hot! Totally loved it! Wow...
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July 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm so sad to see you go, and wish tht, tht horrible person has many bad things happen to them. I guess I'll be following you to wherever you decide to take your fictions.
Loved the story as well.
Loved the story as well.
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July 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hey! Sorry I was behind in my reading and just now finished this. I really liked this story and I liked the way Naruto broke Sasuke down and took care of him. I especially liked how this was told so well with Sasuke's thoughts and state of mind. The whole process was beautifully done. I'd be really interested to see how they handle switching places which would of course be a reward for Sasuke.
Sorry to read about the negative comments that were made. This story is so totally NOT racist or stereotypical and the person who made those comments does not know what they are talking about. But it's also true that there may be many great comments but the ones that often stick out are the negative ones and they can sour the whole experience. Letting go of that anger can be really hard... but it's better when you do because then that takes away their power to ruin something you enjoy (or even just ruin your day). They don't deserve to have that power.
And I'm glad you haven't taken your works down. It's all I can do to keep up with the new stories updated... I haven't gotten around to reading all the other stories yet from the authors I like!
Sorry to read about the negative comments that were made. This story is so totally NOT racist or stereotypical and the person who made those comments does not know what they are talking about. But it's also true that there may be many great comments but the ones that often stick out are the negative ones and they can sour the whole experience. Letting go of that anger can be really hard... but it's better when you do because then that takes away their power to ruin something you enjoy (or even just ruin your day). They don't deserve to have that power.
And I'm glad you haven't taken your works down. It's all I can do to keep up with the new stories updated... I haven't gotten around to reading all the other stories yet from the authors I like!