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by Daydreamer79

schedule February 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Damn!! That was so amazingly awesome!!!! Naruto really is good with reading people. He knows Sasuke is a control freak but also needs to be as Sasuke put it 'gentled,' I love that term. I like how Sasuke thought about the question posed to him about what does Sasuke want and how no ones ever asked him before. I love Dom Naruto, I'd bend easiy for him too with his gentle way about commanding ur direction. I love how u make him that way and also how broken or rather how in need Sasuke is and how he's very much aware of how Naruto makes him feel. When Sasuke can get over his need to control, it will be an awesome and I can't wait to see that. Sasuke'll be skipping to work and his employees won't know what hit them.lol
person DewiSri
schedule February 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You... need to update asap.

It's so damn rare to find a proper D/s story on this site. D=
schedule February 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really love this and eagerly await your next update. I'm so glad Sasuke had someone to talk this over with. Who knew the simplest advice would be to actually talk everything out with Naruto.lol. For a nanosecond I was thinking to torment poor old Sasu that when he showed up at emergency room, Naruto would be his attending doctor,lol. But I see the point of this chapter was for him to come to terms with the direction he's heading. Awesome chapter!! I really love hinata's part in this. Who'dve thought.^^ No wonder Itachi knows what Sasuke needs.X3
person meowkuu2
schedule February 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
horay!!! I was really getting worried for Sasuke there.. knew he needed to sort himself out..question is..will he be able to do that and will Naruto give him the space and time needed to?

Looking forward to your next update mew!
schedule February 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Your writing is so believable & it has the spell to draw me in. I think this is a necessary chapter to show Sasuke's struggle. I like that it's not a "I am a Dom but I met Naruto so I am totally a sub now XD"

Great writing & I can't wait to see what happens next.

*snickers* Hinata being a Dom is awesome!
schedule February 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed everything about this first chapter. Its like everythings leading to Sasuke becoming what he always ultimately was...a submissive.lol I love how u described how Naruto grabbed his wrist with just enough pressure, no malice intended also how he felt when 'dismissed.' I can'twait to see how he will act with Naruto at the club.
schedule February 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Omg!! I thought this was gonna be humiliating for Sasuke, that he would mess up somehow and present himself as an amateur or something like that. I was so surprised to read of Naruto's approval and was floored when he told Sasuke to come and Sasuke did. The hardest he'd done in a while or ever. LOL! Naruto has Sasuke wrapped around his finger and I love it!!
schedule February 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have been waiting forever for this story, lol. Nice chapter, but I'm really excited for the next chapter with the NaruSasu interaction.
person Akira
schedule February 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I think the chapter was perfect for the moment, hope you update soon.

schedule February 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
God I'm hoocked. You need to update asap. Pleas~se!!

xoxo HinaKicksAss