rate_review Reviews

this story is great. i'm eagerly awaiting the next installment.
i absolutely love seeing Sasuke out of his mind and comfort zone. most people stick with the norm of the uchiha always knowing what he wants, but it's nice to see him unsure,worried, and a little scared.

please update i love this story

beautiful! Please keep writing.

i ussually don't like leaving reviews i know it a bad kirk of mine im trying to fix but i just had to tell you that i adore your stories and the drama suspense sadness that comes with them and im not just talking about submissive dominant i mean all of them which include the healing, old lovers and new beginings,The Agoraphobic Incubus,The Flavor of Sin (this was so hot),My Master,Discovery (this was new for me but i loved every min of it),Spirits Within (very funny yet romantic at the same time),Returning Home (go naru love threesomes),The Weight of the Heart (love happy endings),Skin Deep (love model naruto)First Impressions(ooops somebody dip in the cookie jar),Give Me Your All(and then some take it like a man lolololol sorry had to add that),Caramel and Cream(who want vanilla and chocolate when u can have the cream de la cream),What Dreams May Come (this one was sad but original and i love how u blend the story line). so as u can see i've read alot of your lines and believe it or not this was in the span of 3 days yep no lie that why i say i had to give u a shout out and some props. now you might be wondering why out of all your stories i pick this one to write a review in well thats because (k hold your breath here it comes lmfao) ok the truth is because out of all the ones ive read so far this one has yet to have an update and does seem to be complete i hope u dind't give up on it please say it isn't so please have mercy.
ok ive taking enough space and time hopefully you read this far (crosses fingers) and away your decision oh master dreamer till we meet again or in this case u write again.
P,S please update

I loved everything about your story. From the more 'technical' point of view, I would like to compliment you on your language, it's deliciously sophisticated and just how I like it to be. The pace is also well-chosen. As for the story, the thing that stands out the most in comparison to other fanfiction that can be found on this site is how you build your characters. It's cohesive, intriguing and convincing. The characters have some kind of magic in them.

I truly cannot wait to read more from you.

wordless now, but I can review again later, can't I? *goes to check*
Yes, of course I'm not being serious. I'm not a serious person!
Okay, enough. Review: You're doing really well! I know I shouldn't, but I do have some expectations... I know it's your story, and though it may sound stupid, PLEASE DO WELL UNTIL THE END!
Oh well, that was just my frustration speaking, heh.
No, seriously, good job. I loved the instrument part. Hated Genma, but well, we all know him xDD

ohoh sasu start submitting a little, I lov this sotry, please update soon

Such a great story! but I was like, 'you idiot, can't you see you NEED IT!!!' So I say it's so great because it made me think that. It's kind of hard to explain... *frowns*

And again it took away my breath. Wow, shudders shot up and down my spine! Can't wait for the next chapter! This story is becoming my absolute favourite one!
Thank you for written such an awesome piece of art!

Wow. The scene on the dance floor and later the scene in the bathroom were easily the hottest stuff in this fic yet. You've done a really, really good job of showing Sasuke's inner turmoil over his attraction to Naruto; I feel terrible for him. It also, conversely, makes me a bit annoyed with Naruto. What was great about this chapter was that it showed that becoming Naruto's sub isn't just a matter of completely changing how he views himself, but is ALSO a matter of getting used to other people viewing him differently as well. This is major, major stuff (and the reason a lot of people stay in bad relationships--they don't want to think of themselves, and have other people think of them, as someone different). So that's what I find to be somewhat unappealing about Naruto here: Sasuke is undergoing a major shift in identity in order to be with Naruto, but Naruto is...? Sure, Sasuke is giving him a hard time about them getting together, but that's a comparatively small thing. Once he has Sasuke trained, it'll be business as usual for Naruto: he'll be a dom with his sub. That doesn't strike me as very fair at all; if Sasuke has to give up so much, and change himself so much (even if he'll be happier in the end for it), Naruto should also be expected to give up something for Sasuke. I dunno, I feel like at the end of this fanfic, I'll be happy for Sasuke, but not so much for Naruto, if that makes sense. Anyway, I'm sort of curious as to Itachi's involvement in all of this. Did he hire Naruto on purpose for Sasuke's sake (going so far as instructing Naruto to pursue his brother), or did Naruto & Sasuke catch each other's attention without any direct interference from Itachi?