rate_review Reviews

Love the story. Please update soon.

Its really good and the flow of the story is great

I can't wait to read more! This defiantly hoping he's not submissive Sasuke seems to be so fun to play with! And I really hope Naruto gets into his head--this is going to be amazing!

Love it and cant wait for more.

Thank you for the update! This is just shocking and I couldn't love it more!

I like the different take on this story. Please update soon.

I do like this story so far, Sasuke is an interesting character: I think all the pressure he's feeling in his life right now makes for a logical reason as to why he'd be interested in switching roles. Regarding your author's note at the end of the 2nd chapter: I want to be honest here, like whoever left you that previous comment, I've also found this story fairly reminiscent of other BDSM stories in this fandom, not so much in the sex itself (I agree, there's only so many ways BDSM can be written), but in the scenario of the story. BDSM isn't my personal kink, so I don't read a lot of Naruto stories in the genre, just the better-known ones, but of those that I've read, nearly all had a high-class BDSM club that only elites could go to as the setting (as this one does), and featured characters that were well-connected to the club in some way--either as sex workers (as Naruto is), as senior members (as Sasuke is), or as owners (as Itachi is). And especially because it's this pairing, there's often an "I don't need him as much as he wants me to need him" scene somewhere in the story (as this one has). A couple simple tweaks to the scenario presented here would have helped make this story seem less reminiscent of others, especially if you'd changed the setting. If not that, then made someone Naruto & Sasuke didn't know be the owner of the club, or even made both of them average-Joe club members. This isn't a badly written story by any means--I don't even think it's necessarily a bad thing that this is similar to other BDSM stories written in this fandom (you're in good company, right?)--but yeah, there are definitely some similarities.

I very much enjoyed the surprise of Haku being a highly desired Dom. The entire chapter had me worried for Sasuke's impending train-wreck. You did a lovely job creating/building the tension leading to Sasuke's crash at the end of the chapter. I'm enjoying your story-line. Looking forward to your next update and seeing how Sasuke will cope with what happened!

Love it!!!!!! You never fail to hook me and leave me wanting the next chapter, lol! I really like how this is different from a lot of D/s stories, it's original, and I can't wait for the next chapter!

A Dom coming onto a Dom...

I think Naruto gets off on making Doms into Subs. Love the chapter, even through there was little Naruto and Sasuke interacted.