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for The Submissive Dominant

by Daydreamer79

person POHness1
schedule December 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
very nicely done. i like this chapter. and we all knew that sasuke would resist, so the sasuke/izumo lemon was almost expected. it will take our poor dear sasuke to realize that he is a sub at heart. there will be more resistance, or at least i believe so. still, i cant wait until he gets broken again. naruto will reign supreme. and i see a punishment coming from this little exhibition. hehe ^_^ plz continue. i cant wait for the next chapter.
person paintedshadows
schedule December 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So happy there is yet another wonderful chapter up. Hope you're feeling better! Keep up the awesome work!
person Bluesake
schedule December 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is good. I can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule December 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. Can`t wait until Naruto get his hand on Sasuke. The whole dominating Sasuke while Sasuke was dominating some one else what just amazing.
schedule December 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Holy Moly!!!!! This is going to be an interesting story...seeing Sasuke struggle with what he really desires and what he thinks he desires. And I can't wait to read what Naruto saw in him. Love this story and look forward to more.
person Gingitsune
schedule December 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I love how you write the struggle that Sasuke is going through as he fights his desire to be submissive to Naruto. Can't wait to see how you will develop this story! :D
schedule December 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
DayDreamer, forget negative thoughts or comments. Your story is original in its plot and beautiful to read. I am not dissatisfied in the least. You have delivered a masterpiece that everyone should enjoy and love. I look for it actually, everytime I log on to see updates. And the Sasu/Izu was PERFECT for the plot of Sasuke's 'breakage' for Naruto. I am an absolute fan of Naru/Sasu but that was a wonderful scene. Keep on writing and we all need Haterz, right? Let em' Hate hun ;p
person kit
schedule December 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was fantastic, definitely worth the wait. <3
person meowkuu2
schedule December 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I neeeedddd to read more of this!! I feel so sorry for Sasuke.. I'm like worried he may go off the deep and become a recluse.. he needs someone to talk to...

please update soon...ppppppllllleaaaaaaaasssssseeee
person Vidori
schedule December 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap that was hot and awesome and inspiring and woo! Fabulous job. This was just... Woo... Yeah... Can't wait for more!