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for The Submissive Dominant

by Daydreamer79

person Nivell
schedule December 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG, Sasuke doth protest too much, lol! We all know he wants that Naru-cock in his ass, brutally fucking him til he forgets his own name. Oh man. Hope to see more soon!
person hinata chan
schedule December 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
new chapter!!!!!! yes! thx!
well i don't mind sasuke trying to convince naruto, i think the end made it all worth it! in the end naruto was pleased and it triggered sasuke's pleasure, that was great!
i hope you're alright & please don't let us wait so long again, neh?
schedule December 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry hear that you were sick. I LOVE this story so that I'm glad that you are okay, and that you update sooner...please?
person Ivy
schedule December 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved the ending! Very intense... the dynamic Sasuke feels of trying to deny becoming submissive is wonderfully written. Glad you feel better ;-) This is a very interesting take and is not cliche at all.
person toosweet
schedule December 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the raer bdsm story's that I really like. Keep the momentum of this story going.
person Dragon
schedule December 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
person Kenshinjunkie03
schedule December 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I want to say I love you. I spent the past few days or so away from here in hopes that something new would come. And just as I was about to say to hell with naruto, you updated this awesome story. I really don't like this pairing, but if it's from you I'd read it at least twice. So I have to say thank you for giving my naruto life something new^_^V
person shinejshi
schedule December 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoying your story. I can't wait to see how it unfolds and where you'll take this. I'm obsessively looking forward to your next update(seriously I've been checking back 3-4x daily with my fingers crossed)!
person Anon
schedule December 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh!
Update!
BDSM stories are hardly ever well written and
motivated. This one is. Go on :)
person grimy13
schedule November 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit. You gotta give us more! I love your characterization of Naruto and Sasuke. I'm glad I read this.