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November 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
great beginning, poor Sasu, he is so stresfull hehehe hope NAru can help
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November 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Omg, I love it! Great emotional ties to the audience, excellent scenes written. Please update this as soon as you can!
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November 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow great start! It's amazing how Sasuke's resolved crumbled in those few minutes. Im going to love this...I can feel it.
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November 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I see soo many thing happening between them! I'm really excited for the next part. Sasuke is so in shock that he really didn't see this coming to even prepare for it! Loved it!
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November 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
.... Nice. I love the BDSM stories, but only if theyre well written... And I think I'm gonna like this one =D I'll be keeping an eye out for updates!
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November 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully descriptive! Really great read... hope you add a new chapter soon ;-)
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November 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was soooo excited to see something new from you. And the D/s factor is a huge plus. This start looks great and I can't wait to see more!
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November 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love this story!!!!!!!!!!!! A promising start & I really can't wait to see where you take it to! :D Thanks for sharing.
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November 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just spent five minutes screaming "It's not fair!" to the walls of my apartment. I'm sure I'll be hearing from my neighbors soon. Never has a fic made me want the next chapter so badly. It'll be interesting to see how Sasuke lets go and gives control to Naruto. I'm also curious about Naruto's POV and what he and Itachi have planned. So awesome!
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November 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow.... neat start. Will sasuke give in.... will naruto be able to tame sasuke. Can't wait for the next chapter... soon please