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I have been into BDSM for a while and I'm really enjoying your story, I'm sooo happy to find one where Naruto is the Dom and he's working with Sasuke to break him down. I can't wait for the next chapter! I really enjoyed the build up, you really get a feel for Naru and Sasu. I hope the next chapter comes out soon. there aren't nearly enough Naru/Sasu BDSM stories out there. Keep up the good work!! XD

sasu agree to be naru's sub. love the way he look, he finaly broke and naru is with him.love this story see you soon with more !!

First: wow, I just love your fic, so hard to find any good fics like that. Most that has the same theme are discontinued or deleted. Been silently lurking and reading your fics here and at y!gal too. I think you are very talented writer :)

Second: I don't see anything racist against Asians when you wrote about Sasuke's eyes. I myself am Asian and I do not understand why ppl get mad at that O.o Are THEY even Asian? They should shut it up. None of the Asians have so far commented and called you racist (which you are NOT.)
If they have something to say, they should also leave their e-mail address so that you can contact them =_=

OMG!! I loved the way you described all what Sasuke is doing and feeling. I can't wait to see how Naruto treats him after having caught Sasuke. This was a great chapter to read.:3

wow ok i enjoy this fic, an the AN was a big wow i know its frustrating when people give you reviews when they don't know what they are talking about or don't know the research or info you know. It saddens me that i wont get to read more of this awesome fic but i can relate to the stress

Oh my god!!! This is the GREATEST muilt-chapter NaruSasu bdsm story I have EVER read!!!! I've been in love with this story from the first chapter and I can't wait to see where you take this story! There is NOTHING that you should change because it is AMAZING the way it is! No matter what everyone says, follow what you believe is right! Because I will always LOVE it!!!!!! So please!!!!! update soon!!!!

First of all, Daydreamer, screw all who don't F'ing get your stories. Obviously, they are not familiar with the different tastes of fetishes and fantasies. If they don't like it OR uderstand it, they shouldn't be leaving you comments that you have to explain to them....I mean really...It's a waste of your time and irritates me to know that you have to explain it. Second, I am or Asain decent ad your words were not steryotype in the least. I did not take offense and found your words to be true, because DUH! it REALLY WASN't! Seriously...who are these reveiwers? This is why I don't post my work on here. People are ignorant. Love your stories. Love your portrayal of Sasuke and Naruto. Love you O.O

P.s. I think I'm going to make an account on Ygal...screw this

I'm definitely agree with Mak here. In cases like these, a litmus test would help to determine if you may be toeing the line too hard.
There seemed to be no need to highlight the fact that his eyes were narrow because he was Asian. Was it really necessary to extrapolate the point beyond 'He opened his eyes as widely as possible'?

You probably wouldn't say about a black person that 'He was blushing, but you couldn't tell because his skin was so dark.'; or 'She couldn't match his weightlifting abilities on the account of her being a woman and having less upper body strength.' It sometimes simply goes without saying, and outlining it may come across as offensive if not done carefully.

In addition, 'Asian' is such a wide blanket term. Do all Asians have narrow eyes? There are so many subcultures under the Asian classification, not just the Chinese and Japanese. Even if you had narrowed it down to 'on account of his Japanese heritage', you're implying that every Japanese person is narrow-eyed with remarkable difficulty showing wide-eyed surprise. Not true by the way.

I know you didn't mean anything offensive by it, but it doesn't hurt to step back and scale it back a bit. I don't think anyone is bashing you or being horribly unfair. Try to see the genuine concrit within it.

I am screaming at you right now. I'm cussing you out and praising your name in the same breath. You updated so quickly, wrote beautifully, placed Sasuke in Naruto's capable hands, and then ENDED THE CHAPTER!?!?!?!1?1?1? How can you be so cruel? ;-) Of course, I'm not really mad at you, and this just makes me want to read the next chapter all the more, but seriously!?! Oh, gosh, I just can't wait till you update! Please let it be soon?

wow

that trip into sasuke's psyche while preparing for naru was incredible~