rate_review Reviews

love the story. it's quite easy to understand how sasuke's feeling. Your descriptions are very good :) the interactions between naruto and sasuke is pretty hot, and we haven't even gone to the good part. Though for some reason, i feel pretty bad for sasuke. He's the one going through all the trouble while naruto's having all the fun. I think it would be interesting to see naruto suffer a little. But i think i feel this way because i usually like sasuke to be the seme. Especially in this story where he starts out as one, then seeing him struggle like this.

Oh. My. God. I can't wait to see what Naruto has in store for Sasuke. No, really, I can't wait. :-) I really hope you update soon. Just curious, how long do you expect this story to be? I hope it'll be long. ;-) Love it, love you, hope you update soon!

I'm still with arya on this: Naruto has it too easy. Everything is falling into place, exactly the way he wants it. By the time he's finished with him, Sasuke will be just another sub. Meanwhile Naruto gets to have all the fun + no struggle; it's a good deal for him. Sasuke ought to have shown the douchebag the door *the second* he said if Sasuke was his he'd know to have dinner ready and waiting for his arrival. The fact that Sasuke got a good punch in is the only thing that calmed me down. Naruto's over-confidence that Sasuke would eventually agree to his terms was infuriating as well. As was the fact that he thinks Sasuke's attitude needs adjusting. Sure, it's part of Sasuke's training, but Sasuke's attitude is what makes him Sasuke. What does Naruto want him for if he wants to "fix" that? (Every second of their lives together Sasuke should be docile, obedient, and attentive? Except for those rare moments Naruto allows to punch him, I suppose.)

I don't know, I think maybe the real problem I'm having here is that besides the mutual haze of lust, I honestly can't see what each guy sees in the other. They've *barely* spent any time together at this point. Prior to the dinner they just had, they met once in the club, had lunch together once, and then messed around in the men's bathroom, also once. Sasuke's agonizing over possibly switching roles makes it seem like it's been much longer, but it really hasn't. It's been a few days? A week? And now Sasuke is making such a massive lifestyle change, and all for someone he barely knows. So I guess I fail to see why Naruto, specifically, is worthy of all Sasuke's inner turmoil and not any other dom. (Choose Haku, Sasuke! He actually treats you with respect!)

everybody needs someone thry don't have to be in control with i suppose but for a mostly dom type accepting that switch must be hhard.
Don't break 'break' him Naru

Its sad to read your are not going to post anymore in here, hope you still keep going with the story. sadly I had bad experiences with ygal so i will no follow you there, perhaps if you have i livejournal i could keep taps on you, but ygal nop. Really sad you ara a good writer. that is why i hope at least you finish this story in here.

and btb, this chappie was worth the wait. it was perfect, i wonder know what is gonna happen the next day, XD would sasu be able to hold his hand xDD.

XOXO

OMG!! This is sooo great!! Poor Sasuke has sealed his fate with Naruto. It seems so harsh to not at least let him masturbate for one more night but I guess you have to start somewhere. I love Naruto like this, I would be such a wonderful sub for him.^^

i do so love this story, and cant wait to read what happens when Sasuke's training really begins. I' sooooo glad that he finally accepted the offer made by naruto (i knew it would take a while, but dang!). cant wait til the next chapter. ^_^

AWESOME!!!!I have waited for this update since like FOREVER!!! Thank you for feeding me ;0

I love this story. A lot. It is intense, well-written, and engrossing; did I forget to mention hot? Please update soon!

delicious~!