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by djserani

person akira
schedule December 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this is really good., i enjoyed the story so much.,
i like how you don't rush the development.,
definitely love the story.,
keep up the good work., ^_^
schedule December 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ugh... this chapter kind of stung... it was lovely and filled in so much but left me wanting more. :0) I guess that's just what I'm meant to feel yeah? Eagerly awaying the next chapter!! Post more soon please.
schedule December 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
BWAHAHAHAHA... the old bakini trick. Very clever and for an old fashioned shinobi like Kakashi I'm suprised he didn't jump her and cover her with a blanket! I love it! This had me sighing and giggling. Lovely chapter. I can't wait for the next. I love signing on here and seeing an update from you! :)
schedule December 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
GAHHH! I just can't seem to get enough of this fic. I really love it... You've got me sucked in. :0)
schedule December 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
uhhh... i wanted to cry through most of this... its beautiful and heart wrenching all at the same time. I just can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule December 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* there just isn't anything else to say... its too good... and they are too bad at fighting what they really don't want to fight. Will the backlash really be worse then what they're doing to each other now?! Does any one in the village not already KNOW cause it seemed earlier like Tsunade knew... or at least suspected. So yeah, loved this update and can't WAIT for the next. More please soon.
schedule December 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OK so they are stupid. :0) In love, but stupid. LOL I am really enjoying this story. It was one of the first I read of this couple and I was doubius at first but you've done it very well. In a believable way.
schedule December 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
uhg... I wanted to cry with Sakura through most of this fic and ended up grinning with her in this last chapter. I haven't wait for more!
person Vidori
schedule December 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ha ha, I started reading this while I was getting ready for work and now I'm late. Lol. Fantastic!

Bittersweetly done. You made my heart ache for them. <3
person crayonbox
schedule December 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You! You made me read a story from chapter one to five about a pairing I dislike (mostly because authors make this pairing total OOC-nags) and made me roar when I found there was no chapter six. I compliment you. *bows deeply*
The story is flowing and I love the emotions between Kakashi and Sakura. This mission is just what they need to explore a (hopefully) developing relationship.
I'm not sure wether Maiko is your OC or one from the anime (a filler episode perhaps?), but I like the way she's not taking over the story as the mission is focussed on her.
I hope you'll continue this story. I'm really curious where the story will be going and if there will be a happy ending. Once again I compliment you for making me interested in a pairing I seriously don't like, making me curious and rather impatient for a next update. :P

ja ne ^^