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for Broken Promises

by AngelTalion

schedule January 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful!!!!!! Epilouge please!!!!!!!
person kinai26
schedule January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Super cute chappie, very sweet and romantic in its own way. Go Sasuke, go, you can do it!
schedule January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awww! I teared up, its just so cute! Kakashi's lecture was totally unexpected. I was wowed. And I think I forgot to ask last chapter... Did I sense Kaka/Saku...? Not that it bothers me.
The chapter moved us in the right direction, and I'm ecstatic. Lol. And now you are making me wanna go coffee maker shopping! (Shakes head)
person slayr03
schedule January 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
no no no! not rubbish at all!! That was thee perfect way to ease them into this phase. Not too rash, but doesnt ignore the fact that there is no denying that the love is still there and of course that there is obvious sexual tension I love that Naruto remains a bit conflicted and how sasuke's heart races at the little things that Naruto doesn't even realize he is doing. This certainly has the right flow to it, keep it up! I hope it never ends! Thank you for the update and as always I look forward to the next!
schedule January 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wasn't rubbish! You did a great job with Naruto slowly easing the tension between the 3 of them, I loved how you had Kakashi chastising them all! Priceless! Also, you made this chapter drawn out, with Naruto not immediately forgiving them, because he shouldn't - the healing process will take time. Great work on this chapter, and keep up the nice work!

schedule January 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
its not rubbish at all. I liked seeing naruto and sasuke doing domestic stuff together like shopping, it was so cute. Also kakashi getting angry made me laugh. Getting murderous, sure I can imagine that but imagining him getting angry or annoyed just makes me giggle. It was a really good light hearted chapter even though u addressed some serious issues like sakura finally apologizing.
Can't wait for the next chapter
person ZeroZoey
schedule January 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was a very sweet chapter, glad to see things moving in the right direction.
person roro237
schedule January 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! It was so romantic:) Kakashi having a min attack was good. That made them all know how serious he was and me to:) The date was simply wonderful! Coffee maker shopping yea that would be our boys first date. Dinner was the food of the gods I'm sure Naruto thought. The sweet good night kiss 'priceless':) I think this chapter was all that and more. I haven't stop smiling yet ^_^
person tjrender
schedule January 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The latest chapter was absolutely lovely. I've been enjoying this story from the beginning, and can hardly wait to see what comes next !
schedule January 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOh thank goodness!!! I was really getting to the point where I felt like sasuke should actually just move on because naruto was never going to forgive him and give hima nother chance. Yeah we all go and do crazy things sometimes when we have a situation like that but you have to come to a point where you let it go one way or another. Naruto tells anyone that will listen, including the people that he happens to be sleeping with that Sasuke was it for him. That he knew it. It had really gotten to the point where he either started giving sasuke a chance or tells him that he has no chance period. Now that being said....this story freakin rocks!!! the sex scenes are hot and the dynamic is hot tooo. I look forward to the updates every week!!!!