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for Broken Promises

by AngelTalion

person roro237
schedule January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I was missing you so I came to reread:) You know it's true in life when you think like Sasuke was thinking. How Naruto said maybe. I loved that being part and the ending with him thinking about it. I also thought that it was nice of Kakashi to set with Miss Pink. In away I can't blame her as much as I do Sasuke because we all know how long she has been in love with him. So when she got her chance to get-it-on with him of course she couldn't help herself. That was nice of Kakashi to be there for his student. Now how will she treat Naruto? How will the team work together after this betrayal of the two S's? But I know you have to put the pass behind you and move on. Naruto loves pale and beautiful so he has to start to learn to trust again. 'Maybe' in small amounts:) Your story just speaks to me! I really enjoy reading it and thinking about it:) Read you soon ^_^
schedule January 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Is this McDonald's, cuz I'm loving it? Lol. Sorry for the lame joke, but the truth is the truth. I understand the coffee machine woes. I just got married and I'll be leaving my mother's home soon and my brother and I are fighting over the coffee machine and which one I get to take with me.
Can't wait 'til next chapter! It feels like we're starting a new level or something. Yay! XD
person Vidori
schedule January 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I feel like Naruto's just slowly going crazy. It's still going to be a blow-up scene with them, though, right? I can't wait for that part. XD
schedule January 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Babe, I feel like I'm walking on broken glass. Everything right now is so tentative with them. That scares me. I wouldn't hate you for that but how long can Sasuke hold on to that 'maybe' ? It breaks my heart. I know Naruto loves him but her has to MAKE UP HIS MIND !!
schedule January 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very nice work here!
person slayr03
schedule January 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Still here, anxiously awaiting each update, checking every night atleast 3 times to see if there was any movement and you have yet to let me down! I am thoroughly enjoying the pace at which you update, gives me a little time to digest and sit on the edge of my seat but you dont leave me hanging once my curiousty becomes too much to bear! I am not crazy about Neji/Shika, not enough there in the canon to get me going - I need that drama! Which I must say you created nicely (I loved that you had them think Sasuneji was happening! I got excited that maybe it would turn into something but then no I needed to see sasunaru..so conflicted you had me)and I can never say no to a good lemon so bravo and keep em coming! I am highly anticipating the next chapter where I suspect there may be some serious sasunaru..yes?..yes?! You rock, Jaa na!
person roro237
schedule January 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I loved it! You covered a lot:) So Miss Pink is back?! I loved the hold thing with Shika's dad. I could picture that. Him leaning on the door talking stuff:) You had me laughing at the pot being heard:) I so love the idea of Naruto getting his own place and maybe somewhere down the road dating Sasuke. That's a maybe:) I had to giggle at the super slut to:) I so enjoyed this chapter. I did LOL at the story you're sticking to:) But hey thanks for the 'tell' scents I couldn't get the show:) I'm so happy I founded this before bed! ^_^
schedule January 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You teaseface tease!!! LOL! You left me on a cliff and i wanna know what naruto says and i'm all excited and I open it up and its nejiXshika smut, LOL! Loved the chapter though, keep 'em comming!!!!
person smint45
schedule January 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
that was wonderful smutt!!! Thanks a lot!!!!
schedule January 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You gave me something I wanted, but not WHAT I wanted! It was hot though... And that line Neji used, "I'm not going to fuck you. I'm going to make love to you tonight and ever night." that was a totally Neji line! Lol. And you made a minor error in chapter 17: You had Neji look at Sasuke- "Brown met Black"