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by AngelTalion

person roro237
schedule December 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Baby girl I loved it!!!! I can't wait to go to the next chapter but I had to tell you WoW! Write to you on the other side ^_^
person roro237
schedule December 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Now that I've wiped the blood off my computer. My nose just went haywirer:) I've never read those two together brfore but my goodness was that hot! I love it when you have a snowball thing going on!!!! ^_^
schedule December 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh man....Sasuke and Neji are playing with fire lol....someone is going to end up a bloody smear on Hokage Mountain....and it's not going to be Naruto or Shika I'm sure!!!

Great work!!!
person LadyWolf
schedule December 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap...this is the best fic I've read in a while. Shika and Neji belong together, I am huge fangirl for this couple! Shino/Gaara, didn't see that coming...but a good pair.
Forgiveness is the best way to calms ones soul. Naruto's soul needs to forgive Sasuke, but like Kankarou said, Naruto will never forget what Sasuke did.

Naruto needs to stop fucking around!

Post soon!
person Anon
schedule December 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OoooH I'm kind of excited about this. Sasu is getting cut and buff, and Neji will be getting a sample of that tight new body, that Naruto noticed??? HELL YEAH....if that happens it will definetly be intersting...Kissing can lead to so much more between those two...and the smex between them would be hot as hell.

I don't know what's going to happen between them, but I'm having fun reading.

Oh and just a small request, could you please get rid of all those little symbols? It makes it hard to read the story fluidly.

Thanks for another update.
person Vidori
schedule December 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Your cliffhangers are, in the words of Mermaidman: EEEEVIIIIL!

Awesome chappie. I'm on the edge of my seat for the next one.
schedule December 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was a great one! Something tells me that Naruto and Shika won't be amused with Sasuke's and Neji's plan however lol
person roro237
schedule December 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Let me quote Ino "Oh my God"! That was so good!! First off the way you described the Uchiha's house was wonderful I was there walking in with Sasuke. Okay I might be soften a little because Sasuke admitted to Neji which I believe was a very hard thing for little Uchiha to do, why he did Miss Pink. That scored so points with me:) I just hope Neji's plan works and not back fire on them?! Gaara checking out Kakashi ass had me cracking up! The mystery man revealed Shino cool! I have never read about the combo before. You came back for the holiday break with a big bang! I love it! You luck girl with all the great gifts ^_^
person slayr03
schedule December 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love love love this story! I should have reviewed sooner but to be quite honest, I'm lazy. You are so skilled at pulling the reader in! Typically stories like this would have had Naruto forgive him many chapters ago but the fact that you did not allow that to happen is what strengthens the story's appeal. Its such a tease..I get so excited when I see an update!! I cant wait to see how Naruto reacts to this situation!! There is nothing I love more than a jealous Naruto!!
schedule December 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Man, i could almost feel naruto's tears dripping unto my laptop keyboard..*sniff* I feel so much for him. Trying so hard to put up a wall but dont know if he can. Now gaara and shino? am I right? Never saw that one before...But that was such a sweet thing for sasuke to do.

I also hope that you have a great christmas!!