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by AngelTalion

schedule December 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome work - love the drama!
person smint45
schedule December 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS SO GREAT!!!! I really loved the way you discribed the post fight lust of Naruto!!! Poor guy!!! I really pitty him!!!! And Shika doesn't know that he is making it worse!!!!I really hope everything is going to be fine seeing Naruto suffer when they both left was so hard!!!! Plese update soon!!!! I can't wait for more!!!!
person roro237
schedule December 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WoW! That was so intense!! I'm hooked:) You have an incredible story line going on here wOw:) I can't help saying that(wOw). I love the make outs with Shika. I always think of him as Naruto's dearest friend to. I was scare that Ms.Pink would let herself get pregnant. I don't know if I could forgive what Sasuke had done less long Sakura but to forgive is Naruto's way. I truly enjoyed and I look forward to what you have in store for us ^_^
person smint45
schedule December 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ah Things start to resolve themselves!!!! I hope they aregoing to be ok when the fight is over!!! I really want to see what Naruto goes through after a fight!!! Please update soon!!!
person ZeroZoey
schedule December 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Geez Garra is a little wh@re, geez, lol. But that was really really funny. I kinda cannot wait to find out who his crush is, just hoping it is not Neji, they do not even talk to eachother in the Manga, in a way I kinda hope it is Lee yes I know Lee is super different and is fashion sense, eww, but you got to admit he would be the perfect person for Garra and well can you imagine that body!!!! I was kinda hoping for some Naruto/Shika. I am still hoping for that but I also want to know who his crush is I am hoping either Neji or Kiba I do not know why but I like both those pairings. I guess we will see. Naruto is kinda going a little crazy. He is hurt I understand but geez, but with what Sasuke did I can understand. I kinda hope they do not get back together yet, Sasuke still needs to beg some. But as Garra's brother said even if they get back together Naruto will never forget. But I think it is time for Naruto to start healing he really needs it. Anyway thank you for the quick updates, I love it. Really like the chapter and please update soon.
schedule December 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Drama!!I love it!!! these lines really touched me.. “You fucked another person. You fucked Sakura. You don’t get to feel sorry for yourself. You did this to us, to yourself. You were used to getting off after a battle? You KNOW what is inside me, what I go through after battle… Kyuubi would fuck a wild dog if I’d let him. When you aren’t there, I WAIT. It hurts so bad I can hardly walk but I never considered ever once taking a replacement to my matt. I wait for you.”

Naruto is really hurting just by saying that and I really think he's trying o wash all that away by being with all these different people. He can't deny how he feels about sasuke and as much as he wants he cant forgive him either. Not this easily. Sasuke has to hurt.
person smint45
schedule December 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story!!! I hope that the reunion of naru and sasu comes soon!!! I can't stand to watch Naru-chan suffer!!!! And I'm really going to be mad if there isn't a happy ending!!!! But I love you and your story non the less ^^ See you again soon!!!!
schedule December 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
HA..HA! this provided a good distraction for me at 4 am in the morning. I need my daily dose of SasuNaruSasu to keep on living! You do not disappoint at all.

I gotta agree with you. Gaara's tattoo and green eyes are sexy as hell. If he had piercings, I might orgasm right here..lol
nara/naruto-not so much. there's something so dull with shikamaru for me. Yeah, he's smart and interest but he doesn't pull to me as a character.
I'm so glad that they updates are so regular. Wish mine were too also.lol
person jazac670
schedule December 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! i really like the story so far! i can't wait to see how this will turn out! the part with shino and his bugs eating their stuff was funny! man i don't know who i am more mad at though naruto or sasuke/sakura! Keep up the awesome work!!
schedule November 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm confused..you said it wouldn't end as Naru/Sasu but Gaara is saying Naruto will turn to Sasuke again because of mating?