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for Broken Promises

by AngelTalion

schedule November 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I actually don't know if i should feel sorry for sakura or not. Does she deserve to be shunned for what she did: YES...should she be forgiven?: give Sasuke the punishment. He should have had more willpower. I don't blame Naruto for wanting to hurt him, just as much as he hurts now.

As for the gaara/naruto ..I've always liked that better than gaara/lee..so gross. even gaara/nejo trumps that!!
schedule November 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It looks like a lose/lose situation for Sasuke. The harder he tries to get close the harder it get's and Naruto is just building up lovers along the way. I just hope he comes up with something fast before Naruto chooses to forget him forever.
person ZeroZoey
schedule November 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy things are getting out of hand. I am glad however that you told us there will be no Sas/Neji pairings, not just that I am not a big fan of that but if Sasuke he fooling around with anyone else then he will never get back together with Naruto. So I hope he just focuses on that, ways to win him back. Because if there is any distractions he will never get him back and I think Sasuke is smart enough to know that. Aslo Neji will never do anything that would cause Naruto pain, Honestly I think he would make a move on Naruto. Now Sakura, with Sasuke being cold to her, Naruto wanting nothing to do with her, her friends, and even Kakashi's disappointment I think she should find someone, and no not Lee. I think someone in the older generation, maybe Yamato or Kakashi, even Garra's brother, or even someone from another village that we have met. I think she needs a distraction and maybe latter will find love in the most likely of places. Well update soon. Truly want to know what will happen next
schedule November 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, poor Naruto. I can't wait to find out what happens.
schedule November 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Good. Can not wait for more.
person ZeroZoey
schedule November 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
you have to update ASAP, the wait will kill me. Please do not have Sakura get pregnant or even worst they sleep together again PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE. I really hope Sasuke in a way hates Sakura. That he believes that Sakura meant for it to happen or something. Well please update really really soon. I truly hope Sasuke and Sakura get there asses kick. Both need it. thanks again
person volaju66
schedule November 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying where this is going. I would definitely like to see this finished. I'm not a big Naruto/Sasuke fan but I am enjoying your portrayal of all of them.
person tjrender
schedule November 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, will Naruto confront Sasuke & Sakura now that he suspects ? Will Sasuke's conscience make him confess ? Or will Sakura somehow spill the beans ?! I eagerly await future chapters !
person ZeroZoey
schedule November 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Like the story allot, cannot wait to find out what happens. Kinda hope Naruto confronts them calling them back stabbing hoes. And leaves.... Well please update soon. Please do not leave us hanging like so many other authors with angst stories love a happy ending . Thanks again fo
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