rate_review Reviews

Omg. Naruto is not that naive...
He wants love but he's not pathetic. Or delusional.

I love it.

I'M VIOLENTLY LAUGHING.
Nose bleeds?? HAHA

Ahhhh AWESOME STORY!!

Didn't realize you'd updated this. Was a good update--the morning after sex was very sweet. I liked that Naruto is still worried about Sasuke and wanted to stop in the middle of the blowjob because he thought it was too much for him. This chapter felt to me a little like the calm before the storm/honeymoon period. Looking forward to the next chapter where I'm sure more twists and turns await.

You did good for writing this in an hour. Many mistakes but the sex was hot and I'm ready for more!

You didn't disappoint. "“Oh come on Sasuke,” the blonde knew that Sasuke could see him rolling his eyes in the dark, “when would you, Mr Sasuke Uchiha, Lord of the Jerks ever let anyone close enough to touch you let alone remove that stick up your arse to fuck you?”" is one of the greatest lines EVER! Love this story and eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

Pft. No need to apologize for Naruto topping. It worked nicely for the scene and the story. It was good for both guys that Naruto got a chance to comfort Sasuke since so far, it's been almost entirely the other way around. Like this, Naruto proves he can return the favor. And by trusting Naruto enough to give up control and give over his body, Sasuke just proved, once again, how very, very different he is from Kiba. No reason this should be a one-time only event either. Naruto clearly likes being on bottom, but they both liked doing it this way too, so I have no problem if you make them switches; they can go where ever the mood takes them.

I hate you.

I hate you SO much...

I love this story and I hate you for making me love it. GAHHHH

Fine fine... I love you and your stupid wonderful story.


Where's the rest?!

I think Naruto should stay the top. I think he needs that change to truly move on. I loved Susuke's insecurities. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.