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by AvangalineHazel

person tovah
schedule December 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
O.O I want to see Kakashi scare the crap out of Kiba by threating him. I love the idea of the copynin being over protective of his team.
schedule December 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh poor Naruto I hope sauske can help him... More please
person smint45
schedule December 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was great!!! I don't like the way Kiba is playing with Naruto!!!! I hope sasuke is going to be his knight in shining armour who will rescue him!!! He needs somebody who really loves him!!!! Thank you and see you again soon!!!!
person Dorkchic
schedule December 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Horrible, scarring, sanity-shattering things need to happen to Kiba. Seeing as he knows about Naruto (that he holds Kyubbi and how he grew up) then there is no way he cannot know how desperately Naruto needs affection. The fact that he is taking advantage of anyone much less one of his close friends is loathesome, but doing it to someone whom he knows has had such a rough life and horrible treatment from the rest of the village is sub-human. Gloating about it to Sasuke is just childish and petty and gives an accurate telling of just how immature and selfish Kiba is. I cannot decide which I would like to see more.

Option 'A' is Shino somehow finding out and breaking up with him when he realizes the true character is his boyfriend. Kiba, thinking that it was Naruto who let the cat out of the bag, confronts Naruto. Sasuke intervenes (showing Naruto that some people do value him) and chases Kiba off. Kiba later realizes that it wasn't Naruto who told when he finds out that Shino had become suspicious because of the way he had been acting and had a couple of his Kikai spying on him to find out what was going on and saw what he was doing and how he was treatment was affecting Naruto. He goes back to apologize (and try to get back into his bed), but by then Naruto has developed a relationship with Sasuke.

Option 'B' is that Naruto breaks things off with Kiba when Sasuke starts to show Naruto that he is loved (due to Shikamaru's craftiness) and Shino finds out about what had been going on when horrible, embarrassing, and suggestive things start to happen to Kiba (again due to Shikamaru) revealing him for the stinker he is and leading his mother to beat the hell out of him for his behavior and treatment of both Shino and Naruto (mostly Naruto).

Either way I just hope that ass-hat gets what is coming to him.
schedule December 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
UGH!!! It gets better nad better and I want ot cry and stmap my feet for Naruto all at the same time! Sasuke has three weeks right? Three weeks to get Naruto back and maybe just GET Naruto... please don't tell me its going to take him three weeks to figureout how he feels... of course if it does... and watching Kiba do what he does to Naruto is what spurns him on that would be good too... not sure how Kiba will react if he comes back and finds Naruto smelling like Sasuke.
person meowkuu2
schedule December 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
sooo.. Sasuke needs to kick Kiba's ass and Naruto... well..talking never normally worked with him to get a point across..maybe he needs a slap upside his head...damn...
schedule December 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
honestly I love the Kiba/Naruto dynamic but with his posessiveness I can see him getting agressive and not wanting to let go of what he has and still keep a bit on the side...
person LadyWolf
schedule December 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ok, My interest has been peaked...:op)

I love Kiba, but with Neji...I don't like him stringing Naruto along...

I hope Sasuke realizes how he feels for the blonde, but telling him might not be a good thing
as long as Naruto has feelings for Kiba.

Post soon!

Love it! Live it! Own it!
person smint45
schedule December 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great!!!! I can't wait for more!!!!
schedule December 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, update soon!!!