schedule
December 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'd have to say this was quite moving. A little poignant.
schedule
December 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, that's pretty sad. I don't know a thing about Naruto, but I have to say this was a well-written story. It managed to convey a sense of beauty and sadness at once, which for a drabble is actually pretty impressive. Keep it up!
schedule
November 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That actually brought tears to my eyes. Very nice work.
schedule
November 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very nice use of the word in a very small story! Well done!
schedule
November 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That paints a terrific scene, sad as it is. It's easy to imagine the image of the dead friend as described, and Naruto's anguish comes through strongly too.
schedule
November 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was beautiful and moving! Thanks for sharing, PW
schedule
November 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Welcome to the prompts! Thanks for sharing :D