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December 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
you forgot the chapter
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December 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, interesting chapter but poor Sasuke for having to endure 6 years of torture. So Orochimaru and Kabuto started raping him when he was 13? Yech, those pedos.
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December 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Unique! Interesting and sweet too! Looking forward to more.
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December 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this fic is awesome!!! I hope you update really soonnnn mew! -^_^-
I like the whole spin on the Naruto verse that you put in and I hope we get to see more of this world
I like the whole spin on the Naruto verse that you put in and I hope we get to see more of this world
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December 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like this.
Please post soon!
Please post soon!
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December 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love love love this!!!!!! It's so original and has a ton of potential. I got lost in a few spots, not understanding some of the terms used, but even with that, i loved the story. I cannot wait for the next chapter!!!
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December 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Looks interesting...I'd get a beta if I were you, or review the whole chapter again for mispelled/wrong words used, grammar mistakes, etc. There were some instances where you wrote the past tense instead of the present tense and there were a whole lot of missing commas. But the premise looks good, I would like to read the second chapter.