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by darkskysong

schedule June 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is still so cute. I'd love to know what he is supposed to depict.
person Jen
schedule December 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's a good story, but I'm a little confused at the end: is Sasuke giving Naruto a page from his notebooks that he wants Naruto to illustrate? If so, the meaning would have been clearer if instead of Sasuke saying "Depict this" he'd said "illustrate this scene" or "draw this scene" since "depict" and "illustrate"/"draw" aren't really used interchangeably and "illustrate"/"draw" might be more of what you meant?
schedule December 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very cute! :) Reminds me of my friends and I in class when we had to sit at those long tables in highschool or when our teachers created desk groupings... :0)
schedule December 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I found this was so cute!!
person Jelp
schedule December 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
:) Very cute and sweet! Love the interaction between the two, especially in the modern college setting that wasn't so wild and hectic: something realistic yet heartwarming. ~ Jelp