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You are portraying the lifestyle very well. I lived that life myself at one time and made me flashback to those moments. I hope you keep things as real as possible and even show the really horrible things that can happen in this world such as rape, coming across bad drugs, the over doses, and possible STDs.
But I love this fic so far and I really hope to see more soon.

Don't worry about whether people like the path your characters have taken. There is one certain thing you have to remember when putting your work out there for others to review... you can't please everyone. Even though I myself am a straight arrow (no chemical dependence of any kind, ever), I can read, listen or watch stories where others are portrayed in the same light as your characters and can differentiate between my own ideals and the story I am taking in.

As for how I feel about this story, I have to say that you've got me hooked. I can't wait for you next update.

Oops... posted the same chapter twice.

Drug abuse is just one of those things that's always tough to read about because a lot of us have seen it up close and personal. However, I don't think you need to sanitize your story in any way. The only way tackling these kinds of subjects would become offensive is if they get glamorized, like taking a bunch of X is the best and only way to party, all the cool, sexy people do it (while only jerks and losers refuse to do it), and there's no negative consequences whatsoever to getting high out of your mind, etc. I didn't get the impression the fic was doing that; Gaara got pretty messed up from all those drugs he took, after all. We can dislike the characters' actions without disliking the fic, right?

Oh this is fantastic! I was wondering how Sasuke and Naruto were ever going to meet in the middle because naruto seemed to haver deep commitment issues. He didnt mind leeting anyone play with him but he didnt want anyone to have him. And Sasuke, besides being informed by neji, had this opinion that NAruto was this beautiful little sexy slutty doll he wanted to play with but not keep. Well not untill later that night anywat :0 great sex will and can blow our minds! but now I see that Neji has no idea what Gaara or Naruto does. He runs in the yakuza worls and even though he was "keeping" Gaara" gaara doeasnt have a financial need to be kept. and Naruto, boy oh boy, Sasuke is running legit businesses for his familly and he will be running into Naruto and what a surprise that will be for sasuke and a mystery to unravel for him. A mystery of why Naruto acts that way when he so obviously is starved for love and affection. Looks like Neji and Sasuke want to give and Naruto and Gaara need it. Neji is going to have to shape up or Gaara wont be tolerating that too much longer. Neji might like to blame Naruto for all of their problems but he isnt the one to blame, he is just the one that Gaara runs to because he is gaar'a rock.

Chapter 4 pretty much had me doing the Yes! dance. Please update soon, because I'm addicted to this story and I need to know what happens next.

I feel it's unfair to rake you over the coals about the rampant drug use, when it's stated clearly in your summary..."sex, drugs and Him." Besides, that's part of the fun, these aren't real people, and you should be able to make them do anything you want, especially things that aren't feasible in real life. I love the story, and I love the background you've given on all the characters. Thanks for all your hard work.

Seeing Gaara's condition in this chapter, Naruto gets a massive thumbs down from me. Wanting to comfort your friend is a good thing, but doing it in this way is a very, very bad thing. Not only did Naruto get Gaara completely wasted, but he wanted to give him even more drugs so he could sleep with even more guys. Just Kakashi hadn't been enough, apparently. It's a miracle something terrible hasn't happened to Naruto & Gaara as a result of getting that wasted. :P

Hmmm... for once Sasuke seems like the relatively normal, sane character, while Naruto is the one with issues. Beyond looks and sexual satisfaction, what appeal will these two have for one another? I would imagine Naruto might find Sasuke a little boring since he seems somewhat sheltered and is a relatively serious person. Not to mention, Naruto doesn't like Neji's involvement with the yakuza, so he might not be that happy to find out about Sasuke's family. On the flip side, I doubt Sasuke will like Naruto's methods of having fun (definitely don't want to see Sasuke getting wasted on a regular basis just because that's how Naruto likes to do things), and then there's Naruto's commitment phobia, which will surely cause some difficulties between them. Looking forward to seeing how you resolve all this. :)

MMMMMM! I love it! I really appreciate how verbal your semes are. Please keep up the delicious work. I hope all goes well for you and your family. Take care!

Sexy story is sexy. I think I might die from how naughty and smutty it is.

I'm blown away:) I would really like to know how Naruto and Sasuke will meet and or hook-up?:) I definitely liked how Neji and Sasuke became friends. Then that touch of Kakashi, yesss! This is very interesting. I also like the name of the club:)