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by AngelTalion

person Althydia
schedule April 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like it. I don't know what you have in store for this story, but I want to find out.
Neji and Gaara really make a nice couple, even though there are some insecurities. The yakuza aspect certainly complicates their relationship.
I think the thing I'm most unfamiliar with is Naruto as a slut (and the drug thing). Is there a particular reason behind this behaviour? And will Sasuke try and make him change his mind about that, or are they both players?
Also, will we see more of Itachi and Hinata, or were they mostly used to set the scene in the prologue?
I look forward to more of this new story...
person darsha
schedule April 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love it love it ooooouhhhhhh sluty naru im excited please keep going please its only the second chapter and im allready hook
person v
schedule April 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Like it! waiting for more :)
person Carousel
schedule April 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this work of raging gay fiction. XD And I really love slutty!Naruto. This looks like it will be a sexy, awesome story. <3 Please update soon,
I'm really excited for the smut.
schedule April 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow! this story is really interesting

hmmm...a new story plot i wonder how will naruto and sasuke meet, what will be their first impression to each other..
please update soon

person satterb
schedule April 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Are you kidding me???? This is exactly the kind of story we all want to read! LOL Please keep up the good work. I love the dynamics between Neji and Gaara!
person richon
schedule April 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
a very good start. i want more§§ want ot know how sasu and naru will met. see you soon
schedule March 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I read ur profile again and didn't see u talking about this story. I hope u can get back to it as well. When uve finished ur other stories. :)
schedule December 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
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person satterb
schedule December 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This looks really good so far. It was funny to have them smoking a joint. LOL I look forward to more. Thanks for sharing with us.