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Very interesting. Please write more it would be a pitty for this to not come to fruition. :3 I am eager to read more

ah, man I really like this story plzzz plzzz plzzz finish it :)

It is very cute and so far quite interesting. I am looking forward to seeing what's next.

I'm really enjoying this so far. It cute and simple to read. I don't think think I've never read any fanfic where Sasuke and Naruto are mangakas, but this is really cool.
Hope to see more!

Man, geez. I really wanted to burst that tension. It was SO thick, I started to freak out. What is going on with Sasuke though? All his brother had was concern for him.

what happen between sasu and his brother, why sasu is so upset?? love this story so far, see you soon

Woow, chapter 5 is amazing. I love the character depth that is developing!

AWWWWWWW... boys are SO dumb. I swear boys are just so dumb.

More soon please I love this one.

Great chapter - with more Sai weirdness, kind of Sasuke and Naruto bonding (over the painting), and Naruto being his usual cheerful self. I really liked Itachi's appearance and his conversation with Naruto. Will it happen again or will Nauto try and make Sasuke answer the phone next time? Also, is it why Sasuke was fine working at Naruto's flat: to avoid the phone calls? I can't remember if you mentioned why Sasuke doesn't talk to is brother before. I guess it will be explained later? Nice and original story anyway. I look forward to the next chapter!

oh my goodness, i'm so happy you updated!
this sounds so awesome, i love the dialogue between the two
please update soon!