rate_review Reviews

I couldn't help but think at the end 'Sasuke is so bossy...' Naruto should tell him what to do about something. The guy is in his home, he's got his own 'place' on the couch, he's telling his guests they're welcome to stay (not that Naruto didn't want her to stay of course, so he didn't mind), and he's telling him what to do, taking on the bulk of the work and leaving Naruto with the scraps he's not the best at (artwork). I think Naruto can contribute more than art and Sasuke should give credit that it was Narto's basis for the idea even if he added onto it to make it a bit more in depth. I also think Naruto should bring it to Sasuke's attention that he shouldn't constantly insult his intelligence otherwise they'd still be going in a fruitless circle over the plot....Just syaing, that's my opinion. Lol at the moment as you can tell, I don't like Sasuke very much. Naruto I see putting in more of an effort to truly collaborate. Sasuke seems to be remaining rather fixed in his own ideas until others relent to his wants. And also he should take into account that maybe while what he said to Naruto at the party might have been something to motivate Naruto into competing with him, he should know that words are just as powerful as actions even if they do have good intentions....
I am truly interested to see how their manga plays out. It's an interesting concept that relates to Alice in Wonderland although I didn't think of that until you had Sasuke mention the relation =)

You updating this story always reminds me of how good it is, and how much I enjoy it! Not too angsty, I like the dynamic between Sas and Naruto! Even though Naruto is sensitive, he can deal well with it. You also make Sasuke weaker than he would like to be, which makes him more likeable. Thanks for all your hard work!

I like it!! A little sad its not a yali manga but that was probably too much to hope for :)awaiting the next chapter!

god plot naru, sasu agree it will be a wonderful story. sasu is not made of ice finaly, he has got a heart. love this story!! Please update soon

Ohhh, dont worry about lenght. It feels reads like a manga... Im so loving it! Please continue! I want to read the whole series!

Sasuke and naruto are so cute and Sai is great! He's too funny...unconsciously so.

i'm loving this so much
sai is so hilarious

Ok, I like Bakuman so I get how it inspires this. I can't wait for their collaboration and I like Danzou in this story. Will there be others in this story?

I guess I'm fortunate to think this story is moving along nicely. I understand the characters emotions, and can feel the sexual tension. I'm relieved that no one is over analyzing every little emotion that runs through their heads. Stories written like that are tedious. I enjoy the dialog, it doesn't feel forced. Sai is really entertaining, and plays a perfect "devil's advocate". Just keep up the great work. Thanks for sharing with all of us.

I love the story and think it is developing quite nicely. I hope to see another chapter soon! :)