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December 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
very good plot, I am like kakashi, I will bewaiting, update soon please and mery christmas
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December 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love it! This plot is so interesting. I can tell this will be awesome. Can't wait until you update again! >_<
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December 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oooo, this story is thoroughly exciting!
I'm looking forward to it turning into something really fantastic and enticing!
Love the matching of rivalry too, absolutely brilliant!
I'm looking forward to it turning into something really fantastic and enticing!
Love the matching of rivalry too, absolutely brilliant!
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December 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Righteous. For once I'm actually rather excited to see where an AFF is going. Shun the cliches and I have a feeling you'll do just fine.
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December 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is quite refreshing. I look forward to the next chapter. I also wanted to offer kudos on not having Tsunade as the editor. Even though Danzo is an evil bastard in the real story, he makes a good, hard-nosed boss. Thanks for all your hard work.
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December 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like your opener... and I can't wait to see where you take this. I'm really enjoying it. I really can't wait to see what they end up writing... :0) is it too much to hope for a story that turns in yaoi by mistake not design? Heeheehee
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December 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Definitely a very interesting start! I'm excited to see where their one shot leads them :)
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December 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's ridiculous that Sasuke is so predictably bitchy and egomaniacal.
What even more ridiculous, though, is how much we all enjoy reading it.
What even more ridiculous, though, is how much we all enjoy reading it.
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December 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, interesting!!! I can't wait to see more.
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December 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like this! Very cool! Keep going!