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for This is Not a Game [Complete]

by JaydenNara

schedule January 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... this is interesting. Naruto is actually smart but still loud. Poor sasuke all those irritating leech fan girls won't leave him alone. Same goes for Naruto since he's like smoking hot! Poor Naruto. xD
person Nicole
schedule April 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is the second time I have read this fanfic and I can honestly say that it is still one of my favorites!! I love everything about it! If you are a fan of NaruSasu or ItaKyu this is a fanfic for you! I recommend this to everyone out there!! <3 love the story and the author!!!

Can't wait for the sequel!!
person I am me
schedule October 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
That was such an amazing story!! Very well written. You should do a sequel to this, so we can find out what happens to naruto :)
<3
person kaizoku
schedule February 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
what!! where is the sequel, dammit, dont leave me hanging like this, please T_T I want to know whats gonna happen next...
person Blue Neptune
schedule December 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just read TINAG and it was wonderfully written, I thought the entire story was perfectly plotted except the end. I can fully understand that it was becoming tiresome but the way you ended it was not good. Unless you had full intentions of doing a squeal. It has been about three years now, so I’m guessing it's safe to assume there will be no sequel which is a shame because I thought the story was very good and deserves a better closure then you gave it. Even if it is a short one shot. The end was a big disappointment, Just my honest opinion.
schedule May 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This was an insanely amazing story! I actually started reading it on FF.net and continued it here! You're a great writer, and although I am more than angry at where you left the story, I will eagerly await the sequel. Great job!! <3
person Athrun434
schedule May 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
ending the story like that big cliff hanger I can say I wasn't happy but if your making a squeal to continue the story I cant wait to read it. keep up the good work
person smint45
schedule May 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So now it is complete. I must say I'm really not happy with the ending... well I still hope you will post the sequal soon. See you!!!
person ForeverAndEver
schedule May 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Have to say I'm a bit disappointed waiting so long and then it ends just like that. I'm hoping you'll have the sequel up soon, as I do enjoy your writing style.
Hopefully you'll have some free time this summer to write and relax.
Looking forward to your next story, please please don't take too long.
schedule May 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please continue this story. I would like to see what happens to Naruto.