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for This is Not a Game [Complete]

by JaydenNara

person carousel
schedule July 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much and I'm glad you updated. This was a great chapter and I can't wait to see more. I hope there is a happy ending.

Update soon!<3
schedule July 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
the story is getting awesome.... i am completely hooked.... i cannot wait to see what actually happens next.... please hurry and update
person silverfox
schedule June 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YAY for fast update!! As always, your characterizations are spot-on. :) Well, I didn't get the Kabuto-ass-kicking I asked for, but at least he didn't get what he wanted. XP stupid kabuto... Man, bad stuffs gonna happen soon, yea? I hope Naruto and Sasuke can weather this storm. :D Can't wait for another ridiculously-fast update!
schedule June 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* I just love their together time. Both couples but especially Naruto and Sasuke of course. Will Naruto tell Sasuke that Kabuto was the one that tortured him? I don't see him wanting to tell all that but Sasuke might suspect he left some things out. Especially since he saw fear and not just anger from Naruto. Anger would have been most likely but learning to fear someone is often on a more personal level. This rising action is killing me you know.

person smint45
schedule June 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was totally hot!!!! But still I can't wait for the World going to shit as you put it!!!! I Hope to see you soon!!!
schedule June 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*Sirens blare and EMTs run in with a stretcher to rush reader into the hospital from blood loss*
So now we're coming up to some action. I'm excited!
schedule June 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
FUCK!

That was very sexy!!! VEry full of hot smutty goodness :) Loved it! Love this whole story in general. I can't wait for the next chapter.
person Carousel
schedule June 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 27 was excellent. It's about time the danger set in again. I was worried Naru and Kyuu were losing their heads. Please update soon!
person silverfox
schedule June 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yea Kabuto, get lost!! (snarls menacingly) I hate Kabuto. Every time I think of him or see him, I snarl. Grrrr... Anyway, loved the rest of the chap! Heehee. I prefer SasuNaru, but I definitely appreciate some good NaruSasu 'punishment'. ^.^ Can't wait to see how THAT ends. ;D

About bus-related stories, I don't know if this counts, but the first time I got on a city bus by myself, there was this woman across the aisle from me who couldn't keep her mouth shut. I mean, if she didn't like something or someone, she told you. And there was this guy who was hacking up a lung right behind me. So this woman keeps saying, 'how gross' and 'he's gonna get me sick' and 'I wonder if he'll throw up'. I just kept leaning further forward just in case he really did throw up. Man, it was gross and I was so happy when my stop came up!

As always, can't wait for Kabuto to get his ass handed to hi- oh, I mean- can't wait for the next chapter! Same thing, right? RIGHT?! :D
schedule June 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Bite the bullet...hmmm... well you said several reasons. It can mean you finally did something you have avoiding doing which would be Naruto finally sleeping with Sasuke even though he tried to wait. And Sasuke's new... uh... toy might also be bullet shaped?!? Gosh should I actually say that? lol If Naruto had told Sasuke his real age and job then that would be biting the bullet but that wasn't in this chapter. Nothing else comes to mind.

What I love? Everything lol!There is soooo nothing to hate in this... except for Kabuto. I keep waiting a bit stressed for the prologue events to catch up to the story. The stress of knowing Naruto is going to be hurt and Sasuke will be watching expecting him to die is just going to be the death of me.