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for This is Not a Game [Complete]

by JaydenNara

person Gaara_Junkie(:
schedule June 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
1. this chapter = amazing. i love your fics
2. i think the obvious reason for the chp title is the vibrator in sasuke's ass
3. the second reason may be naruto having to admit, or maybe confirm would be better, him taking sasuke's virginity? thats my gess.
keep up the good work!!!
person alex
schedule June 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
just finished chapter 26. One thing I liked "the Implant" pure genius! I only disliked that the chapter ended lol. can't wait for 27... don't make me wait too long!
person smint45
schedule June 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow finally we get some action again!!!! I really Hope the uchias will find out soon!!! And narus torture was just great!!!! Thanks a lot and see you again soon!!!
schedule June 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
UHG THIS WAS SO DELICIOUSLY DIRTY!!! I loved it... NOT what I should have done with my lunch hour cause now I need a break to cool down but WOW! NICE! Thank you!

NOOOOO Bad kabuto. We were having Slutty!Sasuke
person Carousel
schedule June 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
One reason the most recent chapter is because it is a bullet vibrator in Sasu-chan. <3 Loved the last chapter so much. Very cute, however I am worried about what will happen now that Kabuto is there. :]
person serenitylite14
schedule June 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm guessing you called the chapter Bite the Bullet because the sex toy that Naruto used on Sasuke is called a Silver Bullet. Also another theory of mine is how Naruto had to face Itachi after him and Sasuke have sex for the first time, but that could be completely wrong. Anyways my favorite part was after they had sex and Naruto had to face Itachi and Kyuubi. I think it was funny how Kyuubi kept getting hit or elbowed. My least favorite part was how Naruto called Sasuke a slut. I guess it bothered me some because Naruto is normally so loving when he talks to Sasuke, so it was kind of surprising when he called Sasuke a slut even though I know Naruto didn't say it out of malice. In the long run though I really like your Fanfic! I love how you made Naruto and Sasuke wait to have sex even though it drove me crazy because I could feel the sexual tension growing! I love your story and I'm sorry I haven't commented until now, so keep up the good work! P.S. Sorry for the long review!
schedule June 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*wipes away drool while grabbing more tissues for my nose bleed*

Are you feeling better sweetie?
person coco
schedule June 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved this!!! I think my favourate thing is that Naruto is woried because he isn't being insulted *insane laughter* and a part I don't like is when Itachi acts like a bitch to Naruto(I understand the protective brother aspect I just like it)
person Alex
schedule June 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just finished chapter 25, you my friend are a GOD among fan-fic writers! I can not wait for the next chapter!
schedule June 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I..you..wow! This story is plain amazing! I've just finished reading the whole 25 chapters in one go. I think I now have square eyes that are very sore but I just could not stop, not for the life of me. I even forgot to eat! ou've send me on an emotional rollercoaster throughout the story. From laughing, to crying, to being angry, to feeling all happy-gooey inside. Let me tell you, I'm not much of a fan of AU stories but yours rocked! And I really love how you made Kyuubi and portrayed Itachi-chibi (love that one), Itachi and Naruto. I cried when Fugaku and Mikoto died and I laughed my ass off when Tsunade came barking into Shika's hospital room when he was making out with Kiba ^_^ In the last chapter you asked for one detail that I loved and one I hated. Well, I - of course - liked the making-love-scene between Naruto and Sasuke but I also liked the part where Sasuke asked Neji for help. I would have loved to see Neji's face *lol* What I hated was Sasuke's way of treating Naruto after lunch. The poor lad! And how Itachi immediately thought that Sasuke's behaviour was Naruto's fault. Bad Itachi,bad! ^_^ Now, what I would love most would be an update - ASAP!!! Thank you for this amazing fic!