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for This is Not a Game [Complete]

by JaydenNara

person Carousel
schedule June 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This last chapter was so....YES. I loved the Naruto and Sasuke smut. It was sweet and sounds like the perfect first time to me.
person smint45
schedule June 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was some wonderful smutt!!! Thanks!!! See you soon!!!
schedule June 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yaay!!! Go Naru-Chan!!! S'uke must be pretty...happy/satisfied lawl xD

But good for Naruto!! I was wondering what had made him so afraid.
person silverfox
schedule June 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YAY they finally did it!!!! :DDDDD Hehe. O//////O Man, I hope there's more where that came from... Now, onto your latest story! (zips off...)
person Alex
schedule May 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just finished chapter 24, as always it was great work on your part! I can not wait to see what Saskue & Neji come up with I'll be waiting in desperation for the next chapter.

Your Faithful Fan,
Alex
person Alleya
schedule May 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story so far. As for a title, all I can think of is Naughty Uzumakis and Scheming Uchihas. Lol anyway I can't wait to read what happens next.
person Carousel
schedule May 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I can't think of a catchy title for the chapter, but I loved it. <3 I can't wait for Naru to deflower Sasu.
person silverfox
schedule May 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... I don't know what the title should be, but I really loved the chapter. I can't wait to see what Sasuke does to Naruto to get him to give in. heehee. >:-D
schedule May 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Gah, loved it! For the life of me I can't think of a title for this chapter, but Dance in the Dark would be good for the next? LOL!

Though you could name this chapter "and if you don't succeed..." and the next one, "try and try again". LOL!
schedule May 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
lol Sasuke-Chan is getting naughty! <3