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May 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm. How about "Holding Back" or "Frustration"
Personaly I have liked all of your recent chapters so I have no idea what you are talking about.
If you don't already have the next chapter named you could call this one "Resistence" and the next one "Resistence is Futile"
Personaly I have liked all of your recent chapters so I have no idea what you are talking about.
If you don't already have the next chapter named you could call this one "Resistence" and the next one "Resistence is Futile"
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May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Naruto is one hell of a bodyguard I see...
You can beat him with 3 bowls of ramen! ^_^
Good chapter. It was very needed and relaxing after all the sad parts.
Now I hope that Naruto will finally tell Sasuke about their age difference.
And now about the title, I think that 'the fluffy part' or whatever you called it is good enough. After all, who cares about the chapter titles...
You can beat him with 3 bowls of ramen! ^_^
Good chapter. It was very needed and relaxing after all the sad parts.
Now I hope that Naruto will finally tell Sasuke about their age difference.
And now about the title, I think that 'the fluffy part' or whatever you called it is good enough. After all, who cares about the chapter titles...
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May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Cute!!! That was so cute!!! Loved this chapter! That scene where they were taking pictures of the brothers was just adorable and even though it made me nervous when Sasuke ditched Naruto... it's funny to picture him and Neji plotting how to seduce Naruto. How long till Sasuke is 18? And I so wish I could have seen the shirtless spar between Naruto and Kyuubi...*sigh*
Anyway, about ways to improve...what specifically? This story is awesome! I think you do a great job of interweaving the serious with the fun and sexy. Each chapter you write progresses the plot and shows more of the character developement. I do like when they interact with other characters outside of the main four two so I wouldn't mind seeing more of that... but seriously... it's awesome :)
Anyway, about ways to improve...what specifically? This story is awesome! I think you do a great job of interweaving the serious with the fun and sexy. Each chapter you write progresses the plot and shows more of the character developement. I do like when they interact with other characters outside of the main four two so I wouldn't mind seeing more of that... but seriously... it's awesome :)
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May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm a die hard fan and this chapter was just so fluffy and cute. I just wanted to hug it and squeeze it and love it. Lol.
'Plan of Action' is the only idea for a chapter name I have, but I can't wait to see more! :) *holds up bowl for more*
'Plan of Action' is the only idea for a chapter name I have, but I can't wait to see more! :) *holds up bowl for more*
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May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was so great!!!! As for a name what do you think of 'heating up' or something along the line? Well it is just an idea, i'm not good at naming chappies^^ Anyway that was wonderfull and I really loved the fight of naru and Kyuu it was great!!!! And I really can't wait for the next chappie!!! See you next week!!!!
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May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I don't know about a title... Frustration comes to mine... LOLPoor Sasuke all that hot tan flesh and he's not aloud to play with it. *sighs* I don't blame him and Itachi should completely punish Kyuu for his misbehavior! THen I think both Uchiha deerve to get to watch the Uzumaki brother's sparring... purely for the raven's amausement. BWAHAHAHAHA "Dance Monkey's DANCE!!!"
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May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
chap. 24 Temptation!
I just LOVED this chapter!! I enjoyed the dojo fighting and would love to see more of it....maybe a steamy session with Naruto teaching Sasuke some defensive moves to help him fend off his never ending line of crazy fan girls!! Lol Poor Sasuke had to go through a lot this chapter....first the temptation Naruto put before him only do find himself denied then to face the trauma of hearing too much information for his virgin mind to process. Then finally to streatch beyond his usual self and reveal his innermost thoughts to a close friend. Sasuke had a very busy and rollercoaster ride this chapter and I totally enjoyed each and every minute of it!! =) The smut was very STEAMY!!! SWEET!!
I just LOVED this chapter!! I enjoyed the dojo fighting and would love to see more of it....maybe a steamy session with Naruto teaching Sasuke some defensive moves to help him fend off his never ending line of crazy fan girls!! Lol Poor Sasuke had to go through a lot this chapter....first the temptation Naruto put before him only do find himself denied then to face the trauma of hearing too much information for his virgin mind to process. Then finally to streatch beyond his usual self and reveal his innermost thoughts to a close friend. Sasuke had a very busy and rollercoaster ride this chapter and I totally enjoyed each and every minute of it!! =) The smut was very STEAMY!!! SWEET!!
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May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
still lovin the story....and i think as far as a title for the chapter could be is "desperate times call for desperate measures" only beacuse for sasuke to open up to neji he'd have to be at the end of his rope.....great chapter and i can't wait until the next.
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May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
And the plotting begins
hows that for a title? lol maybe the next one should be how to seduce a spy, like your previous one.
hows that for a title? lol maybe the next one should be how to seduce a spy, like your previous one.
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May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I lied. I would go with either Frustration or Desperate times call for desperate measures :)