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May 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chap 14 pushing
I was worried half to death my heart rate was through the roof over the confrontation with Kisame.....I was really afread what would happen next and am still worried its not over by a long shot....oh the worrie and suspense
I feel awful for Sasukes pain and Naruto running like a scared little fox with his tail between his legs.....I can just see the heartbreak and it kills me....can't wait to read the next chapter
lol good thing I'm off tomorrow so I can stay up late and read this!!! VERY WICKED AND HAPPY GRIN!!! LOVE IT!!
I was worried half to death my heart rate was through the roof over the confrontation with Kisame.....I was really afread what would happen next and am still worried its not over by a long shot....oh the worrie and suspense
I feel awful for Sasukes pain and Naruto running like a scared little fox with his tail between his legs.....I can just see the heartbreak and it kills me....can't wait to read the next chapter
lol good thing I'm off tomorrow so I can stay up late and read this!!! VERY WICKED AND HAPPY GRIN!!! LOVE IT!!
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May 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really loved the lemon!!!! And Kyuu as the virgin buttom was just fantastic!!!! Never thought Itachi to be the top^^ And I so can't wait for the smutt between Sasu and naru!!! And I want to know the whole story of naruto and Orochimaru soon!!!! Please update soon!!! See you!!!!
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May 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really love that Kyuubi let Itachi top. I feel that Itachi has no doubt whatsoever Kyuubi loves him and I hope this helps when Kyu n Naruto have to tell them they're agents. I was happy to read about Shika n Kiba. Look forward to seeing more of both couples.:3
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May 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loved this as always! I think you captured it very well, and got the timing right to boot. It wouldnt be right for Naruto to give in (just yet, anyway) but Itachi and Kyuubi... Yeah. Very good, looking forward to the next chappie!!
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May 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Omg!!! Lovely divine! I loved the after-date scene. Naruto is so good and noble. :) I'm proud of him. And the lemon... "What? There was lemonade? I didn't see it cause there was all this steam in the way" kind of hotness was going on there. Kyuu's first time; awww! Tachi was so sweet and awesome. I love you J.N. *huggles*
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May 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was fantastic!!!! Iruka as the shrink that role really fits him!!!! And I totally love the way he reacts to narutos real smile^^ that was so cute!!!! I wonder why he gave Sasuke his tracker!! Is the story he told true? That it belongt to his mother? Or did he make it up for suke? I so can't wait for more!!! See you soon!!!
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May 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
most beloved fic EVER!!! I love how they lean on eachother... yeah yeah its a little co-dependant but I don't think it is if you genuinly just love each other and WANT to spend that time together. I love that therapy with Sasuke made strides that 5 years of prior therapy couldn't. :) Just made of win all over the place!!!
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May 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
LOVED IT!! Like always. :) They're going on a date?! Does that mean we'll get to see more SasuNaru dancing action?! I dearly hope so. XD I think you portray Sasuke well, taking into account that this is right after his parents have died. The only thing I saw that was a little out of character for him was near the end when you said he looked at Naruto with 'expressive' eyes. Now, Sasuke's eyes are a lot of things (sexy, endless, dark pools of obsidian), but 'expressive' is not one of them. In my opinion anyway. In this one occasion, with him being insecure and whatnot, I understand, but under normal circumstances, no. :) Hope you update soon.
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May 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved the last chapter like I love all the other chapters. <3 I'm glad Sasuke finally started to grieve better and I LOVE how he called Naruto "Naru." I love that a lot. <3
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May 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was an Awesome chapter! I am so relieved Sasuke got his much need 'therapy session.' Not only was it excellent for Sasuke but was especially Great for Naruto coming into his own realization of his past, which in turn is also great for the other brothers. I think Naruto is leaving out that he was kidnapped and tortured by Orochimaru and his minions. I can't wait to read about the tat cuz I have a feeling it will be another story of sadness. I can't help but feel their is worse torture yet to happen cuz there is a kinda lull to the story a bit. I am so nervous reading the intensity but it is so very exciting to read about it at the same time. I'm so anxious to get to the crux of the story,LOL!! I love reading your stories cuz of the intensity so keep it up and I can't wait for the sequel to my favorite story.:d