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meanie *pointing a finger accusingly at the computer* you... you... meanie. I kinda' feel like I did after watching the Empire Strikes Back... a great movie and they ended it THERE?! With Solo frozen? Seriously? You know... like that.

Hope school & work ease up so that you are able to continue because I truly love these characters. Even though you are a meanie leaving Naruto open to be tortured for years while Sasuke grows up and gets trained. I just about can't bear to think about it. Please don't let it be years.

I am in love with this story.
Simple as that.
Just the way everything comes together and every chapter is better than the last! Geez, I just want to read them all at once and put them in a safe place where I can read them again and again!! So far this is 37 chapters of pure awesomeness. Amazing job!! ^_^
(Ps I love the way you write this, not sure how to explain it but you had some sort of magic plot bunny or something, didn't you? Haha well, I'm looking forward to the next chapters and hopefully seeing Orochimaru dead, or physically abused maybe just a lil... Haha whatever you do with the next chapters will be great! And I am so going to read this again someday!) well that's the end of my random slightly ranting review. GOOD JOB ^_^

Can't wait for the next update! It's a good storyline =)
I do love some action (not to much torture tho), but i'm quite the sap, so i wish for a happy ending, pretty please ^^

Oh my god....I love this story. When will the next chapter be up?

HOWWW COULDD YOUUUUU KILLL THEM D:
;w; i am sooo sad. Dx
by the way, this is a lovely fan fiction you have created here.
i admire you greatly. :D
i've been meaning to review all of your chapters, but xD
i don't know why i just never clicked the button, and for that i am super sorry. u~u
forgive me ;o;

Hey there! Careh here! Just wanted to say that I absolutely love this fic so far. :]
Keep up the awesome workkk <33

Please update! I can't stand being left in the puddle of sadness! I'm in love with this! Don't leave me hanging!

Another amazing chapter! Even if it wasn't Beta it was still fucking AWESOME! Thanks for finding the time to do it. I look forward to the next one and understand the stress of everyday life. Keep up the great work and I wish you the best of luck. Maybe will get the next chap. as an x-mas present?

I stayed up all night to read this and found myself bawling like a little girl at that last chapter. I hope to God that you're still updating this and I still can't stop the tears. Reading the torture our favorite lovers go through breaks apart your audience. We're so ready for everyone to be happy again that it hurts! I know you're pacing it out as you see fit, we wouldn't have it any other way...this is just the position you're leaving us in. Wanting. Nice little trap there, you sly agent- you! Now, before my keyboard is TOTALLY drenched, I implore you to update as quickly as you possible can. There is a discomfort in my soul that can only be filled with a happy ending. And by god, do these poor men deserve happy endings. And hopefully the droppage of the sex offender charges. Besides- little loophole, so you know... so long as the older partner is under 21 and the younger above 16-17, it can be classified as "close in age, consensual." The government sorta understands that when you turn 18, you don't become a completely different person alienated from your peers. They understand that previous lovers and whatnot from when they were 17 are still going to be there. :> Though...you probably know this, but plan on making us get all anxious and worried about anyway on TOP of getting Naruto out alive and keeping Sasuke and Itachi from doing something stupid if they so happen to get out of HQ. D: How cruel. T_T

Oh my god you are back!!!!! I'm so glad!!!! Thank you soooo much for the update!!! Ths chappy was really sad!!! Hope they will be able to find Naruto and that Sasuke will wake up!!!! Hope to hear from you again soon!!!